Reviews for Wandwood |
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KarisTasogare chapter 5 . 9/1 Okay, so Harry promised he would not/never visit England. yet (somehow) his/their school gets involved in the TWT. (thou why they would agree to go, given what has gone on, escapes me!) Thus creating a potential problem, except not realty. Since participation is limited to 'of age' students, it follows that the visiting schools would only bring a that segment of the student body. Thus Harry (and Hermione) would not be there, and so 'safe' from having his name drawn. except, based on the last lines that isn't so. suggesting to me, like JKR, you ignore major plot holes where they 'get in the way' of your plot line. making this a potential 'train wreck' (something I know I shouldn't watch, but am unable to look away from) |
KarisTasogare chapter 3 . 9/1 have to say, found one of your typos highly amusing. although, I just cant imagine who/what a 'caption' might breed with to obtain offspring. Outside of a meme, maybe. |
winniesm chapter 2 . 8/29 This Hermione likes to shout a lot... not very endearing at all. |
bdbradshaw4431 chapter 6 . 8/15 please update |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/28 Rogue,,, rouge goes on your cheeks for color |
Dumbles Basher chapter 6 . 7/19 There is hardly a single paragraph in this whole chapter that doesn’t have an error in it. Further proofreading is definitely required. |
Dumbles Basher chapter 4 . 7/19 There are so many errors in this it is hard to read. Not only do you make all the same grammatical mistakes you made in your ‘Tempest’ story, there are innumerable poor typing/word choices. Get a better beta. |
Reviachi chapter 4 . 7/10 Its crazy how Umbridge flirting should be assault lmaooo. Not that i disagree. |
Fill-them-up chapter 18 . 6/12 Are you still working on this story? |
ELEMENTKING5 chapter 18 . 6/8 Any word yet on a new chapter. |
marek sharif chapter 1 . 6/3 Hey You abandones this story |
Panthertwat chapter 18 . 5/26 Really like this story. Intelligently written. Was hoping Dumbles was not reading Riddles diary... As he was already showed his true colors by annexing Harry at a young age. I kept thinking of Hermione and her parent's story would be used by Wandwood to scalp more students. Inform the parents of the fertility charms the English Government adds to Muggleborn parents, the subpar healing, lack of job prospects etc... |
Merlynn2507 chapter 18 . 5/26 good fic, waiting for next chapter |
PhoenixHarbinger chapter 5 . 5/11 Harry's name can't come out of the since his magical signature isn't on it. |
Russ chapter 18 . 4/25 Ok. Daniel is down, Ron is down, some of the worst people are facing prison. How is Dumbles going to screw it up for everyone? |