Reviews for Harmony Times Two |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A wonderful fic ! Thanks a lot |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...axed to retire early. Nice pun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I'm done. Super Gobs, magic judges everyone, murdering the Dursleys, and of course the "oath-sworn godfather." All these are stupid, and take away from what otherwise would be a great fanfic. I hate the oath-sworn godfather trope. I hate supergobs are the answer to everything, from ridding horcruxes, to warding, to Dumbledore. Its lazy writing at best. And of course over punishing the Dursleys. Abuse is bad, prison bad if its violent, its not off with their head bad though. And finally magic simply judging things and saying ok, we're done. Why not write that in chapter 1, bam problem solved. Just beyond silly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am REALLY in "Love" with your writing style |
![]() ![]() ![]() My wife used to say "One of the definitions of insanity is to repeat the same actions over and over again and expect a different result." So, they're all nuts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You still got the meaning of blood traitor wrong. It means denouncing magic and all her good traditions, like the yule, etc |
![]() ![]() Excellent story! I enjoyed the different take on the Harmony time travel. Thank you for entertaining me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Before I start reading this, I have to ask something for the fun of it. Harry James Potter was born at the 31st of July 1980. But what if the Entire Cast was moved 8 Years Forward, making Harry born at 1988 instead, but only Dumbledore became 8 Years Older in the Process. What Major Changes would occur and why? I'm trying to make a Multi-Crossover. Like adding the Fate Series and Kamen Rider as an Example. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i laughed hard at the phrase "magnificent, memorable, mammarial, manifestations." Seriously though, i love this story. i was planning on reading a chapter or two and then start studying for school. For three hours now, i have been convinving myself that one more chapter will be fine before i study. I cant wait to read the rest of the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THANK YOU for correcting the "Paulina and I" No, "Paulina and me." grammatical error. Such mistakes drive me Crazy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm surprised you didn't put in a scene of young Harry meeting his mother's portrait. Surely if he found out he could talk to one of his parents he would be hard pressed to do anything else. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story, write more please. |