Reviews for Harmony Times Two |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this was a great informative chapter, I loved it. And now they will change, but I hope at least Harry won't lose his eye color! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's really getting INTERESTING now! Oh yeah... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, very funny, that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() can you write a harry hermione (pairing HHr) leave Britain for good or escape the Britain wizard world from the pure blood status due to the citizen don't want to change? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely awesome chapter, have really enjoyed you sticking it to “the man”. Especially relating to the greater good bull. Very surprised that Snape actually owned up to his fallacies, always thought that he was very much in his own world, in a perpetual state of feeling sorry for himself. Thanks very much for sharing, I really enjoyed reading your universe Kind Regards, Max |
![]() ![]() ![]() This whole chapter is ridiculously stupid. The story was somewhat okay till now but this... this shows the author really didn't think much about what he is writing. The whole 'magic-judging' BS is just that, a BS. If this really works like this, then there is no need for DMLE. Just get the accused to this room and judge them with 'magic'. It is simply laughably retarded. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Given your quick update schedules and usually short (ish) story lengths (at least in chapter numbers), I decided to wait until this was fully uploaded before reading. Can I just say, THANK YOU for doing this chapter? I love time travel stories, but I ultimately got to the point of skipping the first chapter of most of them when the idiot reapers do exactly what Hermione pointed out in this story. While the idea of an angry grim reaper who is really an overworked bureaucrat might be funny in concept, seeing it on paper really highlights how moronic the reaper has to be. So yes, thank you for writing this and putting this reaper in his place! |
![]() ![]() ![]() While re-reading this I had to laugh at the "Southern" accent. It's dead on the money! I grew up in the deserts of NM and now live in central NC about 20 miles from my Dads hometown. Believe me I get the accent! Worked with a young lady who made "oh snap" (think oh sh*t) a 4 syllable comment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an interesting read. Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A southern and Nebraska accent? Really? That’s rough and they sound annoying. In fact those, along with the California one, make people sound like they are stupid. Did you have to give a specific accent? Couldn’t you just say American? Must they get stuck with the weird ones? I’m sure most countries have what the deem a “normal” accent for their country, and there are ones that are vastly different. Oh well, I’ll just pretend they have a more typical “normal” accent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m so happy you wrote another! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Which esplained why Ron enjoyed Quidditch so much: I was a sport he could play whilst sitting the entire time." This is one of the most blatantly ignorant phrases I've heard in all of fan fiction, and I'm not saying that to defend Ron. No, my problem with this line is that it inherently implies that any sport performed while seated does not require any phsycial effort. Do me a favor, and go ride a motorcycle (the closest derivative to riding a broon we have) flat out for five minutes. I'll bet you're sweating and shaking from the effort required by the end of the first. Other sports that are performed while sitting that also require extreme effort would be Rally, Formula Racing, Karting, etc., etc. Basically anything that requires you to fight against the weight of your own body, multiple times over (e.g. G-forces, which we most commonly associate with fighter pilots, whom also sit while expending tremendous effort) is going to require you to be in peak physical condition. |
![]() ![]() bonne fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was fun. I do think Narcissa should have taught the kids the insults they would be subjected to in order to recognize when they had been used. As well as appropriate responses. Enjoyed it. |