A unique twist on this chally. Thank you for sharing your creativity.

Great story, thanks.

I’m done. Every villain is ridiculously over the top, every justification for actions taken is poorly thought out or explained, and every issue is handles with a deus ex machine. You excluding tell instead of showing, and even when magic is being used it’s written poorly, with terrible incantations and over use the the line “the (incantation) spell”, because you can’t imagine or be bothered to look up what the spells are called. I understand writing for wish fulfilment, but if every potential problem is solved before it can be an issue, then you don’t actually have a plot.

This was a very good and enjoyable fic. I do agree it wasn’t really humor though. I’m always down for an OP and prepared Harry, so it’s still a good time regardless.

This was a very good story that I did enjoy reading.

Well a deserved ending for Dumble! I would suggest more cruel actions to punish him! Maybe nest fic would you interested in giving Harry a loving childhood more earlier?

Wow, I grew up in Northridge, California. Now live in Massachusetts (no where near the place where Ilvermorny is, but it has been a while since Northridge of all places has crossed my radar. Just thought it was interesting that you chose that place to plant Severus Snape us all.

As an America who's lived in both South Carolina (right next to Georgia) and Texas I would just like to point out that I've never heard someone call another person a turkey or say "you turkey".

amazing story

Ah, another completed story from my favorite author.
As always, your story is amazing and delightful to read.
Can't wait to read your new story.

I loved your story. It was wonderful to read. I was excited each time I got to read a new chapter

My family tree has a branch in Georgia, USA. Nobody speaks that way phonetically. Vivian Leigh was not that hammy. Ow. Just ow. Also, people are prone to notice it more if pretty girls are smart…they tend to ask how that is possible, who helped them cheat, etc. Speaking as an MD and former model, from the US South, but what would I possibly know? I am still called nurse, and then asked if my MD is real. Yes. So are my boobs. And my red hair. Now bend over and cough.

So I thought there would have been more with the passing of laws and stuff like that but then you change it more to a wrap-up type stuff. This only gets me thinking that you have an idea for a new story or a different story something else you just gotten itch to write so we'll see how that goes. You all have a good one .

TuxedoMac

Loved it, lovely to read something unique. Only criticism is when Paulina kept saying “I declare” became irritating
Thanks for writing

Great story! Sad to see it end.