I would have gone either with a reaper or born costume, given her name, but then, I am much older.

Could have done an Alucard as well, now that I think about it ( the eldritch one, not the Abs one...)

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Muhahahaha

Also, poor poor ficks of Taylor, we will mourn you forever.

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10/10

Ending of this chapter made me shed a tear , no idea why but dam it hit me hard

I feel like this entrie fic could be Taylor using some eldtritch mind powers to get the author to write this stroy so isekai protagonists dont go to her world, i love reading this

Awwwwwwww, that was a surprisingly beautiful ending to this story that I did not expect! Thank you!

Oh wow, loving these bonus story but to pieces!

This was a masterpiece. Honestly one of the best fics I’ve ever read. Definitely the best worm fic I’ve ever read. I’m sad it’s over of course, but at the same time I’m also a little relieved. This story was so good it was addicting. I lost sleep and spent countless nights awake just to read one more chapter. And I have no regrets. SPOILER WARNING: Time for a review

Grammer 9.5/10. There was maybe one mistake I saw reading and that was one of the headers. Instead of “setting” and underneath it “character’s pov” they were together in one line ex/ BrocktonBayAtropos. But that was only in one chapter. Other than that, there were no spelling or grammatical errors I noticed. Sometimes the dialogue between characters didn’t flow as smoothly, but it was nothing egregious. It definitely reads like a conversation between two people instead of a poorly translated Xianxia fic.

Worldbuilding 10/10. Yes the fic is mainly focused on Brockton Bay, like most Worm fics, but this fic adds much more character depth and lore. It’s been a while since I’ve read the original work, but I don’t even remember characters like Damsel of Distress, the Machine Army, or even the Blasphemies. The characters add so much to this story and they definitely deviate from their canon selfs. Hell, this is the first fic I’ve read that had Danny actually help and be a major character from the very beginning. This is the first fic I’ve read that Cherish survived and became a main character. I also loved how Aisha was introduced, how Riley was saved, how Theo was shown love, etc.

Storytelling 1000000000/10. This is the best aspect of this fic. First off, from the first chapter I knew Taylor wasn’t going to die and after the 10th chapter I knew she was never going to lose. Usually, this kills a person’s interest in a fic early. Usually, but not this fic. The author, ack1308 the absolute goat, has understood that when the Mc’s power is basically a massive spoiler and when you know how the fic ends, you lose interest. But instead of focusing on the Mc and the endpoint, they focused on the journey. Yeah we as readers knew Taylor was going to kill Lung, Kaiser, the Endbringers, and even Zion, BUT WE DIDN’T KNOW HOW and that’s what ack1308 focused on. Taylor kills them, but the way she kills them is absolute cinema. They focus on Taylor’s journey to the end. Also, instead of mainly being from Taylor’s pov, the author switches to other characters pov’s and the story is told from their perspective. Instead of knowing how Taylor will kill someone before she does, we the readers experience them together at the same time that the other characters do. We only focus on Taylor when she preps or when she’s in the thick of the action, not when she’s already made a plan and a step by step guide on how she will End them.

Overall, I rate this fic an actual 10/10. There’s nothing I would change, nothing I actually disliked. And not only that, this fic can be reread. After a couple of months I might remember which characters die and when, but I might not remember how and that’s where this story shines. Being able to relive the experience of Crawler getting an honest to god missile to the face will be euphoric. Ack1308, thank you from the bottom of my heart for making this fic and for making it freely available to the public. Thank you for your time, effort and health that you spent making this masterpiece. This fic gave me so much dopamine, so much happiness and happy feels. I’ve made so many memories reading this fic. Thank you.

I'm sorry; I like your stories, but I can't take it anymore. You have an annoying habit of making characters reiterate all the events that lead to their lives improving, especially to the ones who improved them. Real people don’t talk that way. If I have to read Ashley mention how Atropos saved her and got the gunk out of her head one more time, I'm gonna strangle someone.

Being thankful is one thing. Obsessively verbally harping on gratefulness is another. Most people let their gratitude reflect in their demeanor, not go "if it wasn't for X, none of my self-improvements would've been possible!" every single conversation.

And from a writing perspective? Seems smugly self-congratulatory. Like "see how much better things are when I'm the author?"

Please. Stop.

Wait, what just happened? How ...

Wowsers! I am in awe of how many time and how many ways people come up with to kill off that stupid thing, but I have to admit yours are seriously memorable!

I am mourning the loss of her teleporter, though. Could Dragon create one? *hopeful look*

This bit with Ash and the cupcakes made ME cry. Well done!

This will always be a great read.