Reviews for A Darker Path |
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![]() ![]() Wowsers! I am in awe of how many time and how many ways people come up with to kill off that stupid thing, but I have to admit yours are seriously memorable! I am mourning the loss of her teleporter, though. Could Dragon create one? *hopeful look* |
![]() ![]() This bit with Ash and the cupcakes made ME cry. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This will always be a great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the end - but Atropos continues; lovely ending of another great story. thanks for sharing; looking forward to the next story to hit "complete". all the best to you and yours! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how her ability can be literally summarized as: "Yogiri Takatou with extra Steps." from the Instant Death Novel/Manga. |
![]() ![]() Awesome ENDING to an awesome story! Thank you for writing it, thank you for sharing it with us all, thank you for timely updates throughout, and thank you for actually finishing it! So many otherwise great writers (you know who you are) just leave their stories hanging and abandon them. Of course, of all stories, *this* one HAD to come to a conclusive END! LOL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not gonna lie its noce to actually read s story start to finish as it releases hntil it ends. I dont think i lefy many comments and it took awhile to read tgr last chapter but this was a grand tome of enjoyment. Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck, this story was awesome. Just finished my second read-through. Thank you for the wonderful world you saved IMO, from the grim dark of wild's mind! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not gonna lie. I cried at the end. It was a great story from the beginning to the end. Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is she a lesbian or straight? I'm more curious than anything else. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there! I hope you're doing great! I just finished reading your story A Darker Path, and I absolutely loved it! I'd be thrilled to adapt it into my comic style or even animation. I'd work on it as a commission, and I think you'd really enjoy the final result something you might even want to share! I'm a digital artist open for commissions and have a few spots available. I work on various types of artwork, my rates are reasonable, and I always deliver high-quality pieces. If you're interested, let’s discuss it further! You can reach me here: - Discord: baran59354 - DeviantArt: baran59354 - Twitter: ZoyeZest - Instagram: baran59354 Looking forward to hearing from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing. Easily better than most published fiction. Ending left me in tears at the end. Though that was the most fitting end possible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just so everyone knows: I've rearranged the sections of chapters 71, 72 and 73 to make a little more sense, as Friday's events were mixed in with Saturday's. I've added and subtracted nothing, just rearranged things a little. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Amazing, wonderful story and one heck of an impressive ending to boot! (pun fully intended) Thank you for everything you've done in writing this. So many of the epic length Worm fics, and stories on this site in general, never come to a satisfying conclusion whether they get abandoned or life happens to the author. I want to make sure you know that my appreciation is vast for someone who completes stories they start. Loved how many things came together in so many ways, and the 'Shear' breadth and scale of what you must have had to do to keep all those threads in line through telling a story this long. You did amazing work and this was a pleasure to read from start to End. I look forward to whatever you set your mind to next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a fantastic ENDING; bravo. |