I love that stink line !

So this is the same Sirius that was grief sticken by his godsons death? Work on your character arcs

Ron bashing is over the top here. And I say that while having no love for ginger menace.

On the sidenote, I can't believe English doesn't have any more appropriate word for that artefact other than undignified "sack" and vague "bag".

Interesting take, I can't believe 99% of fics with Wormtail just go the same canon for of him staying Weasleys' rest voluntary.

Competent Wormtail? What nonsense is this? Go on...

Thanks for a great read! Nicely done!

Great story!

LOL that Sirius was pranked by Dobby:
Yyes, take me to a location where no one will see my appearing; 30 feet seaward of the tide line! How is it to be on the other side marauder?
Sirius seems to have lost his focus, and began to show his roots as a pureblood, and Harry must put on his societal mask. Again.

Dmbl's divestment sure padded the word count

I honestly hate how you're treating everyone but Harry as useless, cruel, racist, among many other things, it's depressing and honestly annoying to read

And Sirius has always liked Lily, not in love but as a friend, seeing how he speaks so badly of her is annoying

Another thing I don't understand is why there was a war between Voldemort and his Death Eaters and sympathizers against everyone else for supposedly supporting Muggle-borns. If in this story you're making everyone insult those who aren't purebloods, Sirius would never accept that because he hated his parents.

what the fuck? why so rushed and disorganized? your works are already of mediocre quality, interesting but mediocre, this is even worse, on top of that harry here acts extremely forgetful, who hides a bag and doesn't remember until 2 days later? and he has changed his clothes, but the bag is still hidden in his pocket... and then the same thing happens with the dursleys, he looks at the contents of the bag for a moment and another 2 days pass before he decides to look at what's inside...

harry canon would never call voldemord "lord fidget" honestly your story only gets worse

as I said the story is not only rushed but it is disjointed and makes no sense, terrible narration, if it doesn't improve by the end of the chapter I will abandon the story, I'm not going to waste my time no matter how interesting the story is

and I doubt that "hogwarts, a history" has information about wands, anyway harry doesn't have that book, in any case hermione would have it

I enjoy your stories, the whole over the top "muddy people" thing you have going on in your stories is a bit much

Most fics I read end after V is offed. This shows an interesting view for lives of non-pure bloods. Well done.

I thought earlier in the fic the elves told Harry about damage to the home. True or my mistake? It is only a minor mistake if true.
The fic is a very enjoyable read so far. The curse on Lucius is brilliant.