Reviews for Second Best
dvdadetti chapter 3 . 2/15
Hi there! I'm just sorry that I was this late - like... 15 YEARS late! - in expressing my appretiation for this masterpiece this fanfiction of yours is! I've come to know - and LOVE - Inuyahsha just recently (2017 and some change... CAN YOU BELIEVE IT?) and while scavenging I found this WONDERFUL artwork of yous! The way you displayed the characters - not only Inuyasha, but also Kagome AND NARAKU (!) - made me read your fanfic and in my mind an episode was displayed - NOT an episode, actually, SOMETHING EVEN BETTER THAN THAT! (you know... sometimes - often - fanfictions are actually BETTER than the episodes themselves, and your "Second Best" is a perfect example of this trend...).
I'm sorry, I cannot provide "constructive" feedback: I'm an Italian raised in Brazil: I DO speak both Italian and Portuguese (Brazilian Dialect) perfectly, but English is just my third language. But I wanted to say that the way you portrayed the characters, the way you wrote the story, the perfect grammar and spelling (yes, English may be my third language, but I've been reading enough English books and fanfics over the last 20 years to make me know the difference between a VERY WELL WRITTEN story - like YOURS - and something translated from Google :) ). Once again, I just loved, loved, LOVED your story, and I'm just sorry I came to read it 15 years after you posted it (and not when you needed the feedback)... I don't know if you still check on the reviews anymore (15 years are NOT a little time gap) I just hope that, somehow, you'll be aware that, after so many years, your work is still awakening such emotions. And that, after 15 years, there IS people who read what you wrote, raises their eyes and start to WORSHIP you as a writer!
Nightshadow chapter 3 . 10/19/2016
Please continue this fanfic. I am eager to know what happens between inuyasha, kagome, Naraku. This story has enticed me, and left me eager for more.
ChocolateReader chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
i love this. you are a great writer.
R4k chapter 3 . 8/7/2012
oh man, PLEASE add more. I think it will be awesome. Inu/kag always but..I need more!
xXxAddicted2ChocolatexXx chapter 3 . 1/22/2012
And Inuyasha bombs yet another one of Naraku's plans to get a lady. Wait, or was it all some evil plot? I think I missed something. It was some messed up, frewdy plan, right? '-' Let me re-read that last part really quick.


Okay, I get it now! Woo! Okay- Two words. EpIc FaIl! Naraku should commit suicide for being so dawmb. P

Loved this story...I was...for a second there...cheering for Nara/Kag. AAAAH! I feel so nasty right now! I am so disappointed in myself for wanted NARAKU- that sexy man ;)- to be with pure and Inuyasha-obsessed KAGOME! The power of guilt compels me. (
kokoronagomu chapter 3 . 6/10/2011
this was so very sweet at the end and in character in the way they interacted (not really communicating as if the other is supposed to read their mind -very typical of anime relationship interactions). i don't think that naraku would have the chance to get her again. have you seen 'inuyasha - the final act' since they finished the series manga and anime?

_ this little gem is one of the reasons i comb through the 'inuyasha' and 'rurouni kenshin' archives. if you're interested in reading/watching a really great series here's the links to 'rurouni kenshin' (please remove spaces) -enjoy:

manga: thespectrum manga_scans/rurouni_kenshin/

anime: animeseason rurouni-kenshin/

or an alternate if the above doesn't work in your area -on either site you have to scroll down to episode 1:

anilinkz category/rorouni-kenshin/



kokoronagomu. deviantart. com

kirr1001 chapter 3 . 3/25/2011
Luckily he's dead now... So sweet and passionate story, you descriped Kagome's feelings good; of course when Inuyasha acts that way, any normal human would be hurt and story, thank you
kagome1995 chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
Omg so good plz don't stop at this chapter there has to be a sequel right
Kipcha chapter 3 . 9/24/2009
Very sweet... And very, very, very creepy at the same time. Holy cow, Naraku is one heck of a creeper O.o But the InuKag moments were great, and it seemed very in character! Excellent.
Mars Butterfly chapter 3 . 7/30/2009
Man, Naraku is a very good manipulator...anyway, keep updating, it's really good!
Litayoliechi chapter 3 . 7/17/2009
Very well done. I like how it's a different take on it. I'm not sure if i want more or not hahaha
Nikkii-hime chapter 3 . 12/1/2008
C: What a great story also very sorry about your hubby, I hope that maybe one day you can find happiness again although it might now be the same D: A wonderful Fanfic writer such as yourself died a day before he did ;_; I found it quite strange

Sorry I am rambling anyway I love you writing fave yes C:
Mako-clb chapter 3 . 11/24/2008
An interesting story, though I think, even with enchantments, it would have taken more time for Naraku to convince Kagome that his lies were the truth. She has seen first-hand how devious he is. I think this would have been an even better story if you went into more detail of Naraku's attempts to manipulate Kagome.
kachiryu-chi chapter 3 . 7/13/2007
oh, my gosh. i really love inuyasha and kagome together. i mean, yeah, naraku is sexy but he's heartless. inuyasha will really love and protect kagome and that's what she really needs.

please, oh please, don't put kagome with naraku. PLEASE!

i mean, in the event you choose to write a part 4.
kitsune-koinu chapter 3 . 5/20/2007
XD great fic!
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