Reviews for Lela of Bast
Ezelina chapter 22 . 2/24/2013
Wow this is so one of the best fanfics i have read u r great plz write many more xxx Ezelina
princesskristi1998 chapter 22 . 1/24/2011
I like it. My question is: if Ella was Lela, and Lela was an imagination of Ella, how could the other girl be Lela? Wasn't she an imposter? There was no Lela in Bast..
Lit Lady chapter 22 . 8/29/2009
Wow! Your story was really, really good! I love the whole twist with Lela of Bast being a real person! Keep writing!
bellathedisenchanted chapter 22 . 10/27/2008
Ooh that was really good, I can't believe that was your first fanfic. I'm so glad you completed it, I loved it from the beginning to the end, and Lela, is awesome, though I was scared she and char would fall in love. And Mathew is really cool!
Pinery chapter 22 . 3/1/2008
awesome.
Whimsical Flourish chapter 22 . 1/20/2006
good story
Whimsical Flourish chapter 21 . 1/20/2006
the end of the chapter sounds like part of a page from the end of a book, good chapter btw
JustWriter chapter 22 . 6/2/2005
Good job. But I think that if it was your work you should have gone w/a different ending. Olive married a rich guy, not Hattie.
Soccer-Bitch chapter 22 . 10/7/2004
really cool story. i really enjoyed it. later.
v4n3s5aCH4N chapter 6 . 8/5/2004
I LOVE your story!
Fyliwion chapter 22 . 4/12/2004
Oh my... your first fanfic? Truly? I didn't know.. I thought you were one of those beloved and infamous authors you hear about on this site... I loved your ficcy, the thought behind it was good and you do nice characterization... hope you continue to write
R.S.A chapter 18 . 4/11/2004
WHAT THE HECK? O.O *oggles* They dance for about an hour and already its "I LOVE U! MARRY ME!" . Holy crap, that guys worse than Ross on 'Friends'
R.S.A chapter 17 . 4/11/2004
...bleh...it wasn't char... o but that would've been awesome if it had been. ah well, this is fine too.
R.S.A chapter 16 . 4/11/2004
HA! IT'S CHAR!
R.S.A chapter 15 . 4/11/2004
...the idiocy...x.x...so...gullable...too bad I've too much curiosity. Too late now that I'm dying to know what happens despite the actually literary flaws.
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