So damn good! Looking forward to an update.

A wild Hognose appeared! What a wonderful little drama noodle! A danger cober! A Shapespearian Shovel Serpant!

I know this is not marked complete, but this first chapter is very intriguing. Thanks for posting this.

Did Barty get the wand, or did he escape his own death before he could claim it? So far is look like Voldemort 5000 and Harry 1.

Yeah, I get the feeling with the way this story is going that Dark Voldemort is going to have all the warriors and the death star and all Harry and group are going to have is pain.

Andy drugged her sister, but did she kill her?

I wonder how much power Voldemort stole from Harry?

That was a setup to destroy the wand. Why was Harry using Voldemort's wand, where is Harry's wand?

Isn't Bill an imposter wearing polyjuice pants?

Uh oh, I wonder if Harry changed to his Obscurial form, or if his elemental abilities unleashed?

Whom is polyjuiced as Bill, it can't be Voldemort as he would not have the patience, and it is not Barty as he is dead?

Wizards and Witches are too easily led, they believe all that they read and see...when with a wave of a wand or drinking of a potion can alter reality to a powerful and non-powerful person's whim. I expect the Ministry will be coming for Harry soon.

Did James get rid of the collar, or is it still there? If it is still there, is it some kind of homing beacon or a remote portkey to yank James and anyone touching him back?

Poor Smaug did not get his staff for his horde.

Wow, Voldemort has suck to a new level of abominable. However, he fails to understand that what he is plotting will break Harry in ways that are not wise, as it will release all restraint.