Reviews for Ron Weasley, Boy Who Lived
Guest chapter 7 . 5/25
LOL. Here I was just talking about the flashbacks I was finding irritating. But in this chapter they really did work.
I didn't like them at the beginning because I could not see that they contributed to the story. It would not have mattered to me if most/all of them had been placed in chronological order, because it was all rushed together like background info, just letting us know what was different in this world.
But these flashbacks/memories worked for me.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/25
In the first few chapters you bounced around in time. I almost stopped reading. I'm glad I stuck with this.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/25
This is very interesting and amusing. Thanks.
Mr Moogle chapter 20 . 3/30
Kind of an underwhelming resolution to the story. Also the Harry-Hermione dynamic at the end felt kind of forced given there was no catharsis over the animosity Harry held over how Hermione handled things with them romantically. We leapt from him being mad at her in Hogwarts, to him being mad at her as an adult and then they just start getting along for no reason.
MouseKitty chapter 20 . 2/28
Very good AU. The characters are slightly skewed by their different circumstances, but also just like their original characters. The work would benefit from a proof-reader but the errors are not disfiguring and it is quite readable.
LordGraygem chapter 20 . 2/12
So, wait, they just kicked off Weasley-mort's arrival in a new reality, alongside copies of themselves? Lol.
Fayt1989 chapter 20 . 2/9
Grtz to the final chapter party
Wow very Strong ending After 4 year Appart They finally get wach Other also nice Story close up could be maybe 1 or 2 chapters More with getting on rons tracks but Its totally fine. The Story was really Good very nice build and a great au very very much loved IT.
But that is the Epiloce Omg. I Would love to hear More from Ron and Harry and Hermine Did They get childen
And how Did You manage to make an Even crazier au from an allready crazy au?
Also Did we get What really happend to the 4th grade Harry and Hermine? Did They just Kiss cause There Other Parts kissed? And why they Are alone and Cant remember?
I hope so much this will be the start of an au transtendenz sequel!
Thank You very much for this Story ab i hope You Start a New Story soon'
Monster King chapter 20 . 2/9
All hail dark lord ronomort he who shall rule bed ridden long may he reign over the infirmary good story so far and I am enjoying the story
NeuroCat chapter 19 . 2/3
"Rondamort" haha that had me laughing. Good chapter. I really enjoy the pace of your story and appreciate that things actually happen instead of being drug out through endless chapters.

I hope the manage to get that thing to the Veil without interference.
Fayt1989 chapter 19 . 2/3
HOLY that was crazy oO voldenord Took over Ron Omg crazy wrote was very Good hidden. But What keept Harry and Hermine Appart for so long? Cant wait to get More of this Story
Monster King chapter 19 . 2/3
Awesome work it's a great story so far love the whole Ron Weasley boy who lived angle you have going sure makes a mockery of fate please continue
Auntie Maim chapter 17 . 1/25
There isn't a single person in any of the 7 books named Viktor Krumb. You're also being pretty insensitive, bordering on offensive with your whole "Persian" thing.

Seriously, look for a beta.
Monster King chapter 18 . 1/25
Awesome story
chaoyue580966 chapter 18 . 1/24
Fayt1989 chapter 17 . 1/11
Wow When You Thing the Story Ends IT Breaks out with a complet New World i Cant wait to read More hope You have time to Come back fast
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