Reviews for Payback Time
odonnellzoo99 chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
Good short story
Kairan1979 chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
Thanks for the update.
mamawolfgirl chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
I have truly enjoyed this story.
julschristine975 chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
Thank you for a wonderful story. I've really enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 13 . 9/25/2022
OMG Harry pranked the goblins (that's just to funny and a little nuts) I'm sure after Harry finally told them what he did had them laughing as well (having goblins looking like little kids) I'm sure that Remus will find that Severus may get along with him a little better than the rest of them, but he's still not going to like having him teaching there (also he knows that he's a werewolf) Oh, oh Harry just made the Malfoy's become philandrist's (that's going to be interesting) Looks like the shopping went well and Harry's little prank on his friends was interesting. OMG Fawkes took Alastor and Albus to the veil and death showed up (yikes) at least he let Albus stay for a little longer. I just loved how Fawkes took the ring and flew over the death and he was able to pet the phoenix. Poor Alastor fainting after seeing death talk to Albus (I'm sure that was a shock for the poor man) looking forward to the next chapter
RedOuroboros chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
thanks for the story great stuff looking forward to more of your writing
Ranmaleopard chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
Really enjoyable fic. I can't wait for your next excellent work. Keep it up!
computer5450 chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
very good and a very big thank you for it, because I liked the story very good
alix33 chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
How could a magical library like the library serving Hogwarts School run out of room?
You meant "from the founders' times", "please disperse it", "teachers' lounge", ".
IMO purple is a nice and magical original colour for the sorting hat to be.
I loved how Harry made the sex change-linked taboo on Snape work.
What a sweet way for Harry to out himself there at the end of the chapter.
katmom chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
Thanks for sharing this adventure. Well done!
Inannacat chapter 13 . 9/25/2022
What am I to do with you? I loved the chapter with the pranks on the goblins and deaths appearance but I had hoped that you would take another day and rest your hands. I am looking forward to the next chapter but please take your time with it. I wonder if Harry is immortal!
HoneyBear84 chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
Love it
Yorae Rasante chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
Excuse me, but I STILL don't get the brick thing on chapter 9, about how Remus had to be in front of the fireplace because it was the only place with bricks in the house.
Was it a reference I didn't get? Something you changed but forgot to remove? Used the wrong word for what you meant?

Because... Harry made it sound like it was important to the werewolf cure, and even the end of this last chapter was about the werewolves being cured...
cameron1812 chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
Such a great read and I am glad you ended it on simple terms instead of how many of these stories godragged out. You did this perfectlyThank you!
Monster King chapter 15 . 9/27/2022
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