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![]() ![]() ![]() Sirius is acting like a guardian already. Good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good thinking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He banished the teacups? Better to have kept them, returned them in the future with wiped memories about what happened. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Dudley. The least Harry could do is make sure Dudley gets a good family. He might hire a good solicitor as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was kinda cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved all the sniffing, LOL ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read a couple of your fanfictions now and im impressed! I liked the Lily ghost story and if you do have spelling problem then they are few and far apart. Please keep up the good work, love what ive read so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this story it was great and very amusing. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() waw this is quite bad for your work you made petunia too stupid with no brain, its fine if you want her to be stupid but to even remove her brain from working she already know Harry can used magic and even knock out vernon and yet she seemed not to be able to grasp the reality and even dared to throw threatening words to harry, seriously author do you read too much Chinese novel and got inspiration from them? |
![]() ![]() 'Turn Delores Jane Umbridge into a 'Weretoad' and see how much she likes it (a 'Malediction' of her very-own, non-transmitible)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is unique and very enjoyable. Thank you very much for writing and sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing story I really enjoyed it 3 |
![]() ![]() I've often wondered what it would be like if Harry was also a Scanner, like in the 'Scanner'/'Scanner Cop' franchises... |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason, I highly doubt Hermione Granger would be the head of the DMLE at age 21 (since you said Harry is 20). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Probably heard this before, but if they complain about your writing, tell them "Don't like it, don't read it. There's 800,000 Harry Potter stories out there," Overhead some incredibly bad stories on FFN, yours are very well done. |