Reviews for Payback Time
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 2/20
Sirius is acting like a guardian already. Good!
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 2/20
Good thinking.
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 2/20
He banished the teacups? Better to have kept them, returned them in the future with wiped memories about what happened.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 2/20
Poor Dudley. The least Harry could do is make sure Dudley gets a good family. He might hire a good solicitor as well.
SeverusAmour chapter 15 . 2/11
This story was kinda cute
Rebatrek chapter 13 . 2/8
I loved all the sniffing, LOL !
TheGodsWeep chapter 1 . 2/4
I have read a couple of your fanfictions now and im impressed! I liked the Lily ghost story and if you do have spelling problem then they are few and far apart. Please keep up the good work, love what ive read so far!
Jet Black01 chapter 15 . 2/4
I really enjoyed reading this story it was great and very amusing. :D
aries12345251 chapter 1 . 2/2
waw this is quite bad for your work you made petunia too stupid with no brain, its fine if you want her to be stupid but to even remove her brain from working she already know Harry can used magic and even knock out vernon and yet she seemed not to be able to grasp the reality and even dared to throw threatening words to harry, seriously author do you read too much Chinese novel and got inspiration from them?
Guest chapter 11 . 1/30
'Turn Delores Jane Umbridge into a 'Weretoad' and see how much she likes it (a 'Malediction' of her very-own, non-transmitible)!
Snaggledog chapter 15 . 2/1
This story is unique and very enjoyable. Thank you very much for writing and sharing it.
LeightonWD chapter 15 . 1/30
An amazing story I really enjoyed it 3
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27
I've often wondered what it would be like if Harry was also a Scanner, like in the 'Scanner'/'Scanner Cop' franchises...
holdingoff chapter 15 . 1/28
For some reason, I highly doubt Hermione Granger would be the head of the DMLE at age 21 (since you said Harry is 20).
ambridge76 chapter 1 . 1/22
Probably heard this before, but if they complain about your writing, tell them "Don't like it, don't read it. There's 800,000 Harry Potter stories out there," Overhead some incredibly bad stories on FFN, yours are very well done.
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