Reviews for Payback Time
Concolor44 chapter 2 . 9/24/2023
All this wandless, silent casting! A guy could get used to it.
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 9/24/2023
Heh. They won't. Not unless Harry wants them to.
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 1 . 9/16/2023
The reported missing thing isn't true in the slightest. You're whining about proof reading when you're that dumb? lmao.
demonboy121986 chapter 1 . 9/10/2023
Alright, since this is the forth story in a row I binge from this writer I gana say this. to the reviewers who talk smack or crap about needing professional (paid for) anything, this is a free site. that a bit to much. Now, if you want to put in a review a word or something you noticed, be polite if you feel the need to mention to help the writer. Just like if you don't not like some a writer puts down, like you got 30 chapters, 50, whatever in and all of a sudden something happens so random it just rubs the wrong way. If you feel the need, say so, try to be polite but also know many writers don't like that so chances are you may get banned for further reviews on other stories. Then... move on people. rant done, This Writer is funny and amazing as hell. I have read this before, might have reviewed, don't know. But the one with Lilly's Ghost, the remake (I have read the other, not the same but similar) one with Xander, yes The Xander from buffy, Read the spider one, this good also, am reading the new one and laughed my ass of with it. Amazing writer and Not someone who needs professional Yada Yada, if something is misspelled or a grammar issue, be kind and just send a pm being nice going "Not sure you noticed and don't really Wana post it in a review but I did notice this." That way they can say "Thanks but eh not worried about it" or "Thanks, I will get on that" or "Fuck off" double edge sword here but it does help the writers improve if you do it correctly aka how you would want it. Just. like. this. I personally would love a response like this if I was able to write a story. Nice writer note before had and someone who is just simply a fan going "They are right, professional Yada isn't need for a free site. If you really need to say something on spelling, grammar, or something like this, be nice an at most send a pm of the error, no need to balst them for this. If you into the story and binge it and suddenly it takes a 180 and isn't for you, say so but done spoil any more then what you don't agree with, no one likes people spoiling the whole story."
blcoachmac chapter 1 . 8/29/2023
Thoroughly enjoyed your stories! Keep on writing!
Aiden Britton chapter 1 . 8/25/2023
The 48 hours thing isnt true
Corwyn chapter 15 . 8/12/2023
An excellent story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
crocket chapter 2 . 8/11/2023
why put them in a cupboard? just shove them in his vault or his pocket space? oh not sure if you meant medal instead metal as goblins they love money and stuff so it might be metal as reward instead a medal
fvdv123 chapter 14 . 7/16/2023
Great story, I like this OP Harry
jada951 chapter 13 . 7/12/2023
I'm a bit surprised that FAwkes wouldn't heal him, but still hung out as D's familiar.
jada951 chapter 12 . 7/12/2023
"Pulling out nails w/ a sponge"

I like that!
jada951 chapter 11 . 7/12/2023
Sorry you are still in such pain.
pain does bite, doesn't it?

I'm enjoying your story so far. Who wouldn't like to be stupid strong magically?
but then, not everyone would think about the morality of it, would they?
Soraslove chapter 1 . 7/11/2023
Go harry!
lunaz chapter 15 . 6/17/2023
I enjoyed this. Thank you.
Shortmike24 chapter 2 . 6/8/2023
stop turning into a girl and the problem is solved...? what weird fucking first instinct is to turn into a chick... just turn into a different boy. wtf
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