okay!nicely done

Malfoy blood and assimilation to work towards eh?

This is getting so long, just so we are clear chapter 107 is titled the world cup part 1, and we are STILL here.

This story started at the end of third year and fourth year hasn't started in 125 chapters and over 500k words.

Is it because you're selling this story?.. It's needlessly wordy and complex.

Your fic is really good, you have great writing skills and a good sence of making a narrative and good grammar. But the way you needlessly make things longer is a little annoying. First time seeing more than 20 chapters to end the world cup.

bon chapitre

Kinda cringe..? I don’t really even understand his motivation half the time. This story has kinda always been cringe with the rampant misogyny every chapter but recently it’s also gotten a whole new type of cringe with whatever has been going on.

bon chapitre

Nice twist

More please

Oh boy Melee Mode.

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bon chapitre

Wonder how long Bones can maintain the undead force.

J'adore ce genre de relation, des petite pic verbal lancer juste pour agacer l’autre qui répond avec humour.

Surtout garde les ainsi !