Reviews for Odyssey of a Mage Part III |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Over the past 20 years of exploring the world of fanfiction, I can confidently say that this story stands out as one of the finest I have ever encountered. The depth of the characters, the intricacies of the plot, and the sheer quality of the writing have captivated me from start to finish. As I reach the end, I can't help but feel a bittersweet sadness; it’s tough to say goodbye to a narrative that has brought me so much joy and excitement. Yet, I understand that every masterpiece deserves its conclusion, and this story has undoubtedly earned its place among the greats. I’m genuinely looking forward to diving into your future works, as I have no doubt that they will be just as engaging and beautifully crafted. Thank you for sharing your talent with us! |
![]() ![]() Olympus mons, the mountain on mars wasn’t named until 1971. So how can they talk about walking on it in 1953? (Slight chrono fact issue) |
![]() ![]() thousand and one rereads. Thanks again, eagerly waiting for the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, so she’s just standing there naked now? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Remember…. No Russian. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’d just like to point out that they sre in India and Emily is still calling it chai tea. As far as I am aware chai just means like tea in Hindi, so when you say chai tea, you’re just saying tea tea lmao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing, absolutely brilliant story. One query I have is what happened to Vinda Rosier ? Arcturus gave up her location but it never is really clarified as to how she died (I’m assuming she’s dead or at least living as a hermit somewhere until the Exodus). I may also have missed the line where her fate is revealed but it would be nice if you could resolve this. |
![]() ![]() when's the update? your other stories are great but this is my fav by far |
![]() ![]() waiting for however long it takes |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's ironic that harry potter is going to be atticus relative. Although, I hope this lily has some sense and chooses someone else, I always though james potter was just as an unacceptable choice as severus, tbh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Atticus is worth more than emily, but he also doesn't care about politics. I think atticus should get rid of charlus, loose ends and all that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In morte numquam soli sumus. Princeps yasha domus romanov antiquissimae et nobilissimae. Amans filius, et frater amantissimus |
![]() ![]() A oneshot spin-off with this and star wars would be cool |
![]() ![]() Part 4 is coming when finishes the other story he is uploading right now. He also said on Discord he still has a lot of work to do on Celestis. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All of this talk about how you would set up the world and Illios. But a major component entirely not noticed or recognized is the interpersonal relations. A powerful mage might garner the attention of hundreds of witches. If he partook in many wives this in turn spurs hatred envy and anger and could spur a zealous attack. There is so much pain and sorrow that happens from infidelity and polygamy. They're destabilizing elements in any society, even if they're freaking awesome. |