Reviews for Odyssey of a Mage Part III |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter! Can't wait to see more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a query, as you have incorporated "Fringe" elements in the story, will you be including the observers in this story.? Or is it an alternate alternate reality where the fringe characters are there but the elements are not.? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Atticus is such an insane character. I've said it before, but he is absolute favorite character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn... that last line goes fucking hard... you're very good at writing the "immortal sage" type of character... do you perhaps have experience writing Cultivation stories? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alexei on South Slav sounds weird there is Aleksa or Aleksandar for example while Alexei is Eastern Slavic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Idk why but this chapter seemed shorter than normal, was very good though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() let the king spank this annoying pest for a while. i want him suffer as villain of this arc :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Discord link is not working. Please post working link. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been following for a while now. Wished i discovered the story when after it was completed. Waiting for updates abd windering if u will suddenly lose interest is kinda tense ahaha but great work as always! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was cheering on Fortie ever since chapter 1 of this installment. i hope he reaches the height of his potential, he was such a bright child. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man I missed these high level mage battles lol - I do really enjoy the politics and morality discussions too but battles seem more somehow |
![]() ![]() ![]() this would be so much better if you just said what is happening instead of waxing poetically about how it looks. as it is right now it is incredibly difficult to follow and just plain tedious to read. ive started skipping the fight scene's because of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see Atticus and Emily fight Raven and his friend! Anyways, I quite enjoyed the Lily POV. I hope we will see what other changes will happen after the HUGE butterfly effect comes into play. |