Reviews for Odyssey of a Mage Part III
TehStorm chapter 32 . 9/17/2023
Nice chapter! Can't wait to see more!
Fawkes-Pas chapter 31 . 9/16/2023
Just a query, as you have incorporated "Fringe" elements in the story, will you be including the observers in this story.? Or is it an alternate alternate reality where the fringe characters are there but the elements are not.?
Verdauga chapter 31 . 9/5/2023
:)
dan.lew.upg chapter 31 . 9/4/2023
cant wait for more
kageknuser2710 chapter 31 . 9/4/2023
Atticus is such an insane character. I've said it before, but he is absolute favorite character.
Martin-di-Arcov chapter 31 . 9/4/2023
damn... that last line goes fucking hard...
you're very good at writing the "immortal sage" type of character...
do you perhaps have experience writing Cultivation stories?
Rosier1389 chapter 31 . 9/3/2023
Alexei on South Slav sounds weird there is Aleksa or Aleksandar for example while Alexei is Eastern Slavic
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 31 . 9/3/2023
Idk why but this chapter seemed shorter than normal, was very good though.
Zaytunger chapter 30 . 8/29/2023
let the king spank this annoying pest for a while. i want him suffer as villain of this arc :D
St Pat chapter 30 . 8/27/2023
Discord link is not working. Please post working link.
Israel Kwame Cross chapter 30 . 8/25/2023
Been following for a while now. Wished i discovered the story when after it was completed. Waiting for updates abd windering if u will suddenly lose interest is kinda tense ahaha but great work as always!
All Crush chapter 28 . 8/24/2023
I was cheering on Fortie ever since chapter 1 of this installment. i hope he reaches the height of his potential, he was such a bright child.
maximusrexmundi chapter 30 . 8/24/2023
Man I missed these high level mage battles lol - I do really enjoy the politics and morality discussions too but battles seem more somehow
scyfly chapter 30 . 8/24/2023
this would be so much better if you just said what is happening instead of waxing poetically about how it looks. as it is right now it is incredibly difficult to follow and just plain tedious to read. ive started skipping the fight scene's because of it.
TehStorm chapter 30 . 8/23/2023
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see Atticus and Emily fight Raven and his friend!

Anyways, I quite enjoyed the Lily POV. I hope we will see what other changes will happen after the HUGE butterfly effect comes into play.
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