Reviews for Odyssey of a Mage Part III |
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![]() ![]() Part 4 is coming when finishes the other story he is uploading right now. He also said on Discord he still has a lot of work to do on Celestis. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All of this talk about how you would set up the world and Illios. But a major component entirely not noticed or recognized is the interpersonal relations. A powerful mage might garner the attention of hundreds of witches. If he partook in many wives this in turn spurs hatred envy and anger and could spur a zealous attack. There is so much pain and sorrow that happens from infidelity and polygamy. They're destabilizing elements in any society, even if they're freaking awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() when is part 4 coming out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonder when he will help the dwarves and get them into Illios proper. And of course teach them the lost blacksmithing techniques he pilfered using the resurrection stone... Well not pilfered. But may as well have |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, all this science shit is cool and all, but it’s starting to feel like a fucking scientific paper or something at this point! I’m here to read fanfic not some super advanced theoretical scientific stuff. And that’s not even mentioning the fact that ALL of the this scientific mumbo jumbo is just going in one ear and out the other…. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit, i just realized that with the runes he could get some of Julius Novachronos time magic down. Especially the spheres. Would be fucking dope |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems pretty fucking stupid that an MC who constantly says he trusts his magic, is unwilling to allow it to show him visions of the past. Especially if hes a king. Unofficially or not. He has a responsibility to his people and its only gonna make more problems the more he continues to be a pancy about it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well there goes the summer and still no upload... |
![]() ![]() Just finished my n:th reread. Great work, can't wait for the sequel. Can you put on update about when you are going to start uploading? |
![]() ![]() In a dialogue, in a converesation, it's quite annoying how you write them. First, one of the persons opens the dialogue with a sentence, then atticus's internal monologue goes of, an exposision of twenty paragraphs follows about something that is often tangently relevant to the conversation before he answers. I have to go back and see what was said first as I forgot during the mid conversation info dumb. Annoying |
![]() ![]() when will the next part start? this is awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finally got to finish reading, I have loved the story. I can't wait for the next segment of it to start. |
![]() ![]() Really good! When will the next part start? |
![]() ![]() Can't wait for the next part! Thanks for the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() yashas story is so devestatingly sad I actually shed tears. this poor, poor boy. |