:-).

This was rushed, too rushed. The Exodus didn't make the impact it should have. You could have spread it across three or more chapters so you could better explore the actions and reactions of all sides

I think it would be cool if Halo era is primarily from one if their kids POVs, though i do like the commin switching all throughout III

Ive been here since like chap 10 or so or the very first Odessey, its been a journey and one ive enjoyed without much if any complaint. Gj mate and i cant wait to see the halo arcs

"It cast/casted its gaze in Living Time with newly-created fascination, the lens that married the Past and the Future into itself yet was now/always shifting and changing into distorted glass as Wars of Fate will-be/are/were fought, Its Eye latching on the-now Fixed Points of the disturbances."

Should be either: "It cast/cast its gaze" OR "It cast its gaze".
'Cast' is an irregular verb, past tense remains unchanged as 'cast'. 'Casted' is never correct.

And also, thanks for the chapter!

Thank you for writing this story I really enjoyed reading it entirely and I can't wait to see what you write in the future

I didn't find this fic until half way through the Hogwarts arc but it has stayed with me ever since

Nice Good job love the series looking forward to the next book.

WOW!

That's pretty much all i can say about this story. It's been a LONG journey. Days, Months and years waiting patiently and eagerly waiting for new chapters of this tale and now that we reached the end...It's so satisfying yet bittersweet to know that Atticus' journey is complete (At least until the next chapter).

To think that the little mage that was struggling with magic all those years ago when you started the story, the teen that was confused about Emily and how to approach her, the young man with too much weight on his shoulders was finally able to accomplish his dreams of getting his people to the stars...

All i can say is THANK YOU, for writing this story and sharing it with us even when many of us hated one thing or another, you never lost motivation and bravery about posting new chapters for us.

Yet, i still hope we will see some snippets here and there until the next saga of this story. I would love to see small chapters of just Atticus and Emily with their children. Just as i would love to see the fate of those traitors and their identity, which i'm thinking Charlus and Dorea Potter being one of them.

Anyways, once again, thank you for sharing this amazing saga with us! I wish you and everyone who followed this story a great new year!

I can never give this story, and the author, enough praise. This isn't one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, it's one of the best pieces of English literature I've ever read. I've been looking forward to each chapter just as eagerly as the last all the way back since 2021, and just a eagerly as I'm awaiting part 4. Looking forward to the future! Hail to the King!

Thank you for everything! I am an avid reader of this story for quite some time and I can barely await the final story.
I wish you everything good for this year and hope the happiness you bring with your stories will continue!

I can't congratulate you enough.
This massive undertaking has been so far, a monumental joy to follow and live alongside you and all readers.
Thank you.
THANK YOU!

I’ll admit that this halo branch story was not something I wanted in the beginning. But the way the story is crafted makes me so very excited at what happens next. Thank you for writing such a story. See you in the summer.

I absolutely love this story and its prequels. The way you've tied the two universes together in this crossover works extremely well. It makes sense in my head. Some crossovers just get stupid but not this. Not to mention all of the character development and depth plus all of the other intrigue and world building blows my mind. Easily among the best fanfiction I've ever read and I'm following close to 1700 stories between the different sites

Always love it when proven wrong and something I dislike in one chapter, is instantly resolved and vindicated as being good writing in the next chapter. I take back my previous complaints. lol.

I am curious, the MC took away all their magic(sorta), but what about the magical plants/animals? Did they grab them all? What about those animals/plants that had yet to be discovered? Also, did the MC obliviate the planet or do ANYTHING to make them not know about them? Cuz I can 100% see ONI operating with some hidden section/department dedicated to the study and countering of Magic... Even if all they had to go on were all the books/knowledge/belongings that had been previously abandoned or forgotten about. Unless the MC somehow succeeded in hunting down and grabbing EVERYTHING with a connection to or teachings about Magic?