Reviews for Harry Potter and the Ritual of Love's Memory |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well written and well paced as always. It's clear you put a lot of efort in this fic. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! I love how well Harry sizes up Madam Bones so easily and so well. I've always liked her character, and you've given her more flesh than most authors. I must admit i expected Harry to jump on her request, given her comments about Susan and the Defense club as well as her wanting to give the populace something to give them hope without really asking for his endorsement of her administration. I can't wait for your take on a Quibbler interview of Harry and whether it will be Luna who questions him and writes up the interview-you have such a deft hand with Luna. Again, a wonderful chapter, and I'm going to be waiting anxiously for #105. Hopefully your spring break will give you lots of time to write more chapters-thank you for the update on how long this arc will be. I must say I'm ambivalent about this story ending! Take care. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just know I read these the day they post (almost always), and generally doing have the bandwidth to write comments, and since ffn only allows one per chapter, I try to hold off till I have some bandwidth I still don't really have it, but I clicked into this when looking for what I'm reading, so here goes Love Perenelle's speech. Sad and fitting chapter. Welcome back from your break! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapters again! I love your writing style and the twists and turns that you put into the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This made me cry...much more discriptive than the original funeral scene in HBP. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOORAY! RLM is back! For being a short month, February suredragged! This was a very solemn chapter, something I should have been prepared for given that the last installment saw Dumbledore's death, and very necessary. A brooding Harry is one we all know, and you wrote him to a T. I'm glad he had Ginny beside him to bolster him in this time of sorrow. Perenelle's eulogy was very well written, acknowledging Dumbledore's failures as well as his successes. Throughout this tale you've been even-handed in your portrayal of the slain Headmaster. I'm assuming you are continuing the two-week posting schedule-I'm going to be anxiously awaiting the continuation of this arc. Any hints on how many chapters it will contain? It's good to have you back...take care! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter, short but emotive |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I cant wait to read the next arc in this story. Thank you so much for sharing this all with us. March 7th can’t come soon enough. I like seeing what’s happening back in the ‘real world’. But I know I’m going to be devastated when he has to go back and there be no Ginny there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! The last chapters with the tournaments where good too, but they had that "side quest" feeling. Don't get me wrong, I really enjoyed them. But the stakes are higher when you write about main events of the story. You successfully described the battle between Voldy and Dumbledore. It had to be epic and you really made it so! Nice work. Thank you for such a good fanfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. You switched timelines, why? I am rather glad you didn't go into details about Dumbledore being consumed by fiendfire, though... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write Snape's experience really well, I feel bad for him that he has to maintain the act. I don't know if Dumbledore knows the truth or feels betrayed in that moment. Glad Snape was able to get both Malfoy and the snake Fun switch back to the other folks, you had me for a min, I was like why did Harry faint coming out of the memory? Also it's been a tough month for many of us in the States, I hope you're finding ways to regulate and ways to consume the news that don't overwhelm. Enjoy your time away from posting! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really well done duel scene |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice chapter |