Reviews for Papes and Lifetimes
NCC-1701.1899 chapter 4 . 12/3/2008
sad but good.
SilverKitsune1 chapter 3 . 3/11/2005
Hmm, OK. First off, let me grovel at your feet for taking the ingenuity to not only think-up an original story with, you know, a plot, but for using the characters from the actual movie instead of creating a sickly sweet Mary Sue. The Newsies section on this site is plagued by those original girl characters, and there's no vaccine in sight. Second of all, three cheers for using several of the characters in the fic, all of which are not used that often. (Let's face it, Spot's the main character in so many of these stories that they might as well make a special section devoted to him.). You also managed to translate the New York accent heard in the movie into words. Nicely done. In fact the only complaint I really have about this fic is that I think it should have been longer. It wrapped up a bit too quickly for my taste, and I think there was so much you could have done after Denton opened up this particular can of worms. But overall, a good story. A good story in the Newsises section. Will wonders never cease?
Bekka chapter 4 . 9/21/2003
Man, you have got to be one of my favorite writers on this site. I loved this one, and how you thought up their lives behind the when they were newsies. By the way, how come you used the k's in Rebekka instead of the c's? My name's Rebekka, too, and I was just wondering; not many people have seen the german spelling. I am thinking of outtakes for Big Brother, and I'll send 'em sometime soon.
Angelfish7 chapter 3 . 7/26/2003
wow, this chapter was great. sorry i didn't review before, but this is a great story..write more

~FiSh
Chicago chapter 4 . 7/13/2003
GO DENTON! *glomps Specs and Mush* They deserve awards for being brave... Very powerfully written. YOu can practically taste the emotions through out this...

~Chicago
Glimmer Conlon O'Leary chapter 4 . 7/12/2003
-sighs-

Oh Lohr.

-clears throat-

Now I feel all awkward.

SPECS! -hugs tightly-

MUSH! -grabs and makes purple- (Girls are pink, boys are blue...purple...)

-sniffles-

Girl, you just rock. I love you. (In a totally unsexual way...MEN rock!)

Glimm
Glimmer Conlon O'Leary chapter 3 . 7/12/2003
-cries-

NEVER LISTEN TO ME AGAIN! I told you to start with skittery, and you DID! and now...

-feels chest tighten with an all-too-familiar feeling-

DAMNIT! You're making me cry again! -groans-

Girl! You rock though, you know that right? I'm off to read more...

-skips off, sniffling and wondering who Denton's next, ahem, victim, is-

Glimm
Spatz chapter 4 . 7/11/2003
oh wow i really liked this story. and the boys' individual stories were so sad, so real, orignal and different from one anothers. I am really impressed with how this turned out. And nice to have it from denton's point of view. this was beautifully written and contained a great plot, its one of my faavorites now. Wow. Relaly well done!

*Spatz
SilverRain 228 chapter 3 . 7/11/2003
wow this is really interesting! You don't see too many stories out there written from Dentons point of view. It's really good so far. I can't wait to see more!
inactive and all stories delet chapter 4 . 7/11/2003
Aw! Yay for Chivalrous!Mush and Specs!

Hehehe. I like Dutchy's comment. ::heart::

Oh, no! Poor Mush. ::snuggles:: Those stupid people can't get you know. They suck muchness. YOU'RE SAFE WITH BLINK NOW. HE'LL LOVE YOU.

ACK! SPECS! ::glomps:: That narsty man will die! ::storms off to do so::

OOh...postcards. ;-;

YAY DENTON! KICK HIS BUTT.

Good ending. :D

Stage
7Minutes chapter 4 . 7/11/2003
Wow...this could easily be one of the best Newsies stories I've ever read. Well-written, interesting, even a bit hard to read at times. Forgive me for gushing, but it was just that good.

~Agaru Tindomerel~
Stage chapter 3 . 7/9/2003
OH! Poor Skitts! ::snuggles him::

Stupid Denton's boss. ::stabs::

More? :D

Stage
Stage chapter 2 . 7/9/2003
DUDE, he's thick!

::smacks Denton:: Leave Skitts alone.

Stage
Stage chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
:D I like it so far. And I'm sure you know who I want. x) SPECS AND DUTCHY!

Luffle

Stage
lazychicka chapter 3 . 7/9/2003
...

:'(

Por Skittery! *huggles* That was sad. Stupid Denton. *throws hairbrush at him* :(

But I like Jack's reaction. Like Jack could ever lift Denton. Hehehehe. Oh well, it was funny.

More soon!

demon

SOTB!
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