Reviews for Fated Dreams |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I came across your work "Fated Dreams" and was captivated by the depth and diversity of the characters and world. I believe it would translate beautifully into a comic, and I’d love to help bring it to life. I’m an experienced commission artist specializing in adapting stories into comics. If you’re interested, we can discuss the details, pricing, and payment methods in a clear and professional manner. Discord: graphic_gold Twitter: VKox139175 Instagram: vinaykox1 Email: I look forward to hearing from you! |
![]() ![]() know you’ve already gotten some comments about it but i have to say, the switching between he and then they aeir between paragraphs when referring to the same character really thu off and it makes it hard to figure out who you’re referring toe moment. It breaks the flow and i don’t really know why you’re doing it? I mean if its an effort to not reuse the same words over and over I understand but id |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting idea. Your writing is pretty good and didn’t drag on too long. There’s a lot of potential here if you ask me. Can’t wait for more. |