Reviews for Fated Dreams
H chapter 1 . 3/15
know you’ve already gotten some comments about it but i have to say, the switching between he and then they aeir between paragraphs when referring to the same character really thu off and it makes it hard to figure out who you’re referring toe moment. It breaks the flow and i don’t really know why you’re doing it? I mean if its an effort to not reuse the same words over and over I understand but id
Molag Vile chapter 1 . 9/25/2022
Interesting idea. Your writing is pretty good and didn’t drag on too long. There’s a lot of potential here if you ask me. Can’t wait for more.