Reviews for Written in the Stars |
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lasslowerence chapter 7 . 5/6 awnn, they are so cute, im shipping harem here, harry with main girl being lucinda, then ana and elanora perhaphs, not pansy tho, she seems fit to be a best friend forever, hope he eventually find romance in them, would be sooo neat :3 |
albinlundholm3 chapter 58 . 5/5 Having read all stories of yours on here I have to say the evolution of your writing is impressive. The contrast between this and for example Stepping Back is astounding. Stepping Back is one of the better Harry Potter fanfics out there but compared to this or your other newer stories it's almost bad. Truly a pleasure to experience your evolution and your stories! |
Zavod chapter 58 . 5/4 I liked this one for a couple of reasons. One of which is that it significantly diverges from the cannon timeline. Another is that the main supporting characters are not Hermione and Ron. The introduction and fleshing out of different races was a breath of fresh air. And Durmstrang. And Cassie. and more... Thanks! |
bryank97 chapter 58 . 5/3 What an amazing story! loved these last few chapters, very well done. And i'm secretly happy that you have a "happy" epilogue, the one from "when the roses bloom again" was amazing but kinda sad :'( |
LuciMoon chapter 58 . 5/3 I absolutely love this story! So unique and well written! Congrats kn a job well done! Cant wait to read korenof tour works. |
Neufeldm24 chapter 58 . 5/2 I've read all your stories and re read most and have really enjoyed your growth as an author. Really loved this story even if it felt a bit less detailed. |
yrlastin chapter 14 . 5/2 Fuck Lucius! |
Aaran St. Vines chapter 58 . 5/2 Outstanding effort. You have a work here to be proud of. You are in the top ten o HP fnfi authors. |
Saphire no Kitsune chapter 58 . 4/30 Absolutely phenomenal little nod to WtRBA at the end there. I was so excited to see some easter eggs smattered throughout, and look forward to reading your next stories. Keep up the awesome writing! |
Advent of Shadows chapter 58 . 4/30 Definitely one of the better HP fanfics I've read. I do think that getting around to the actual war with Voldemort was the weakest part of the story, and certain deaths were kind of rushed by with little to no fanfare, but I never once considered stopping. Actually read the whole thing in one day if that says anything. |
JayBat chapter 58 . 4/29 Thank you for bringing in Eleanor Sr and her story-that-is-more-than-a-story of Harry Evans that we know so well. It's a lovely passage. And thank you for this story, it is an excellent read. |
William Hackett chapter 13 . 4/29 I always find your story premises to be unique and well written but I cant stand how short sighted Harry is. He refuses to change or learn anything that he doesnt imeadiatly see the use of. He is untrusting with no reason to be he had a happy childhood given his circumstances and has never been personally betrayed by anyone he can remember trusting. It often feels like his character is aware of his own plot protection but even that doesnt really make sense because hes some how even more unaware than he was in cannon. Being unaware of his own reputation to the degree you describe in this chapter doesnt make him confident and secure in his ability it makes him seem like a moronic sociopath. Being unaware isnt the same as not caring if he didnt have the plot protection you provided him he would face serious consequences for his gap in knowledge. He doesnt care if he adds any enemies for some reason that isnt explained beyond hes an arrogant little shit, it’s extremely out of the rest of his characterization to not be aware that understanding who wants to harm you is pretty useful information when you’re looking to avoid being hurt. Its to the point i dont even have to read the harry sections because i know whats going to happen. Harry will either be presented with a pretty obviously out of the ordinary problem that could be solved quickly if he ever gave a single shit about anything enough to think about it for a moment or it is an emotionaless diatribe about how he doesnt care about repurcussions or consequences because the size of his balls i guess? Hes yet to have actually been challenged by anyone with a plan. Its like he thinks hes the center of the universe and nothing anybody ever does could possibly effect him. Its like he is dumbledor’s most annoying fannon interpretation come to life. |
Guest chapter 58 . 4/27 very good story, but you did not show the snake being killed. |
Manatheron chapter 58 . 4/28 That was a wonderful story. Thank you very much for sharing! |
Alpha-The-Omega chapter 58 . 4/28 Awesome story. Well written and plotline went well. |