(Disinterested) Oh man. Kaede is so awesome. (Even more disinterested) What a cool character you've created. (HEAVILY DISINTERESTED) She is so cool.
Now that I've acknowledged your OC who is stunting on your main by the power of 'author says so', can you be done with this battle soon?

I'd like to request that you add varying POVs from any of Brock's pokemon after this battle is over in a few interlude chapters from any point in Brock's career.

Especially Link, Jor, Santi, and Don.

nice fight :)

She’s being annoying now and it’s time for Brock to spank her. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!

I get you dont want him to steamroll everyone but when hes got a champion level team, it feels weird that there are so many who also have 1 to match him. Though i guess your focused more on strategy at this level, even if i still feel titan for example shouldnt have went down as easily even if youre giving props to other trainers.

Jeez this is one heck of a battel! Kaede was able to take titan down! A lot of her pokemon were damaged in the process though. Even if there not out. It’s still a pretty even match!

And so the tide starts to turn.

I can’t tell if Brock is really this predictable or not as good of a trainer since it feels like he doesn’t have any counter against her like you gave her a one hit move just to make her seem more threatening. I can’t help but notice you always have Brock feel like a foot note for others to step on. Idk maybe I’m complaining but Brock should have had this fight in the bag since we seen what he could do. And the supposedly rivalry you made between making it seem like Brock is just in the way for the main character to get revenge, please have him become more assertive and not this ‘punching bag’ you have him as. Fantastic Chapter!

This is really dragging and Brock is really not being impressive. She seems to have done her homework and made a plan to battle him but he seems to have put no effort into his plan and has quite frankly battled terribly and has only survived because his pokemon are strong. At this point he really should just lose cause she is clearly the better trainer.

I see that you're having fun writing kaede. If Brock loses to her while she's focused on Bruce fucking Blacthorn I will lose all respect for you.

Awesome fic!

Brock has been disrespected, he must cruch her and win the whole tournament now! I look forward to the first time Brock lets loose a Mega Evolution besides his Steelix. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!

Certainly an impressive bout.

MOREEEEEEE!GIVE US MOREEEEEEE!

wow she cant do that right? dig is an attack and changing out her pokemon during it violates the rules