Reviews for Rainfall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damm this was a great book |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chap |
![]() ![]() ![]() how maany chapter can we expect until the end? thx for your work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the fact that in one chapter, you summarize both characters both good and bad points without diminishing the other. Kumori got the skills in which Owari got the power. The former is just better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I definitely enjoyed this chapter and especially the fight in it. I am more looking forward to seeing how the people of Rain will react to his return including those who betrayed him out of fear since he has a reason to make them afraid now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still waiting for the revenge on Rain for the betrayal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm this is a mess, then again it's Multi SI that shit just never works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yikes, guns in a fantasy world are cringe af. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() De momento comenzo de forma interesante |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very disappointing. This isn’t much of a story, more just event after event after event with no proper flow to connect the story. Stories with tons of ocs like this are usually a shitstorm I don’t care for, and for a second in the beginning I was interested in the potential of this story, but there’s not enough setup, not enough anything to make me connect to the MC personally, I don’t even know what I’m supposed to feel about any of these characters. The Mist swordswoman seemed interesting, I’d like to follow her story and see how she ended up at where she is and what she will do with her knowledge but I doubt I ever will. This story just reads like a giant cyclone of random shit. You don’t explain anywhere near enough for me to understand the characters and what’s going on for me to actually want to see more. Say, why should I care about this Mc? What part of this is interesting? Cause I’ve certainly lost mine and can’t seem to find it anymore. I’m sure someone will like this, people always do no matter the quality since it’s fanfiction, but oh well. It was a decent read for how short it is, and had you simply put in more effort to flesh things out I would have loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awakening of power levels |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never seen a good multi SI fic. Also, guns would only barely work on the weakest genin. More advanced guns might even hurt weak chunin but above that guns will be useless |