Excellent!

It really isn't enough but it will have to do.

Good for Tony. Ziva was way out of line. The answers to the Mossad way are This isn't Mossad and Go back if they are so perfect.

Both are right.

At least Gibbs did the right thing.

Thank you for sharing this story.

Excellent story!

Delightful story. You are so generous to share your creativity with us again. Thanks!

looking forward to the next chapter!

I thought he might go to Jeanne. Too bad it couldn't work out for them. Thanks for sharing.

A nice resolution to yet another episode that was disturbing to watch, mostly for its weird suspension from reality. I know a certain amount of that is needed for most television shows, but this version of 'creative reality' on the show writers' part was pretty jarring..

Sounds like Ziva is getting what she deserves. Looking forward to the next chapter. Just sorry your story is ending so soon.

Great story! I will admit I have mixed feelings about the next chapter. I’m excited to read the next installment but I’m also sad that it will be the last chapter. Thank you for writing a very thoughtful story! :D

Oh Jenny having to do something Gibbs wants her to do... if I was Tony I would take the transfer deciding my life was worth more than working with Ziva again. Although, Gibbs could always bench Ziva every time there is a case and she could do the research and such from her desk. No need to go into the field for her! I am so not a fan of Ziva and wish there were more anti Ziva stories to read!

Once again, a chapter jam-packed with so many of the problems and the reality-stretching regarding Ziva working as an actual agent while really just a liaison. Liaison to what? For whom? So extremely vague, and yet extremely important in the context of a federal agent carrying a deadly weapon, with access to high level U.S. government information and secrets.