Reviews for The Beast Within |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I came across your work "The Beast Within" and love the depth and diversity of the characters and world I believe it would make a fantastic comic and I’d love to help bring it to life I’m an experienced commission artist specializing in adapting stories into comics If you're interested we can discuss the details, pricing and payment methods in a straightforward and professional manner Discord: graphic_gold Twitter: VKox139175 Instagram: vinaykox1 Looking forward to hearing from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazingly written as usual, just as evocative as everything else you write. But DAMN, poor Sakura just canNOT catch a break in the Forest of Death in your fics LOL. Not intended as a criticism at all, just noticed an…unfortunate pattern lmao. This is wonderfully horrifying, and I definitely expected the “horror” aspect to come from the summons itself (and ya know, the whole “threatening to eat Ino if she disappoints him” thing) and not from the boldness the summons gave Ino, and as usual, you do such a great job of subverting the reader’s expectations. Not sure if you were planning to continue this now that Halloween has already passed, and honestly this is already an ominous yet satisfying ending, but I look forward to seeing what you come up with next if you do decide to continue this! :) |
![]() ![]() whoa i didnt expect that! such awesome chapter! looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy crap, that was rough. Thank you for the wild ride! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oMG! What a twist! From the description, I knew things were going to get nasty for her but I hadn't expected that~ nice writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() fantastic, love how much character you write them all with |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Kiba! I actually like him a lot! Ino get a clue pleaseeee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! The dynamic is so cute! Can't wait to see where you take this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! I think I never read a story with Ino really being the protagonist! I would like to see more interactions with Team 8, I think that would be very interesting for Ino. Take care! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww -she's such a cute little squeaker. That was adorable |
![]() ![]() I like that the story is starting to pick up pace and cage wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loads of fun, I like the guilty teenager doing secrets cause dont get teh ay I want and ho it sgoing to BLOW UP. return to your war like creepy as fuck nature young one! like of all the clans the Ino-Shika-Cho alliance is the one that probably benefited from the Village system the most, in comparison to the Senju and Uchiha. not as much combat to the death able to make more secrets for the future fun time. course also the senju were not thought up yet at beginning of series so hey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting ambition and issues with it, like Shikamaru has the heir to a warriror clan issue aspect as well as tad resentment of doing stuff and ahhh. liked Asuma trying for a lesson but it blowing up in her face cause Ino JUDGES them so harshly which is not a completely fair assessment, when it came to a fight I imagine shes still in the same league as the guys. so it was a good get your stuff into gear aspect for the boys but it just made Inos belief and issues with the team even WORSE. like hell her judgement on KIBA who via his clan SHOULD be one of the most physicially adept memebers of her class... well. empathy training! |
![]() ![]() ![]() seriously you're going to tease us like that :( |
![]() ![]() cant wait for the next chapter! excited to see what’s in store for her after performing the summons contract |