Again too lazy to write your own story and also too lazy to fit the canon excerpts properly.
Longbottom wouldn't be able to tell Malfoy anything about Harry fainting as he didn't stumble in their compartment in your story.

So instead of going back to the compartment they put their luggage in, you just needed to shove little canon in where it doesn't fit and forced ride with Lupin on them.
Now if you have Harry talk about some argument between the elder Weasleys, either show that argument or clean up your final chapter.

1. Fakes is a phoenix, meaning it is a bird, meaning it has a beak. That means it cannot smile, as the beak doesn't change shape. If it did, it would be by some magical means, which should be mentioned more thoroughly.

2. Sherbet Lemon is a hard candy, not a drink.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and and liked it a lot.

Harry Potter did a good job in creating his Holy Order artifact that absorbed Force magic.

It will be another good thing for Harry to greet Fleur when she arrives in Scotland for the Tournament.

Harry should be warry of an artifact that would bring peace as described; it sounds like something that controls free will.

Few grammar errors but otherwise good as usual

interesting

Why do I get the feeling that Harry is going to end up facing Voldemort and/or his stooges in the Deuling Tournament?

That is what little sisters do...annoy and tease you...then cry to parents when you go after them.

Holy power has no limit's bla bla bla..but it has its limitations. JFC
omega cringe to name it "holy magic" who does that, 6 year olds?

Excellent update. And I'm happy to see that Harry is getting even friendlier with Susan thanks to Hermione! But it only makes me wonder who else will join Harry's harem. I know Fleur Delacour is more or less confirmed, but I'm wondering if the likes of Daphne Greengrass will become interested in Harry soon enough, maybe even Luna Lovegood and possibly Cho Chang. Anyways, keep up the good work Drinor!

The more i read of this, the more it feels like you put each chapter into a machine to match the needed wordcount. You could tell this story 5x better if you werent so worried about getting paid by the word.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.

Well this should be fun and with you piloting i'm sure the tasks will be fun