Reviews for Plotless |
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![]() ![]() wow, reading this i was thinking of Usagi. and wow. I can just see her as the woman in here.. Very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *favorited!* Wow... Someone likes my stuffs. I feel all blushy. I'm so glad to see more D/U/H writing online, especially good, steamy D/U/H writing like this! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. very steamy! This was cute! I need to see more like this! The Duo/Hiiri/Usa triangles are great! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it |
![]() ![]() please make a H/D/Usa |
![]() ![]() ![]() o.0 That was my expression (well, sort of) when I read this fic. Wow! The H/U/D interaction was just steamy! *wipes monitor* My monitor fogged up because of it ; I'm usually not one for lemony fics, but you did well with yours. Great job! Can we, your fans, expect more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know what to say, I've never reviewed a fic like this. But I really liked it. I'm kind of a Youi Lemon fan and your story reminded me of a Mercedes Lackey book I read. I think your story was good, although plotless as you said. I think it would be really great if you expanded the story and wrote about the characters and their living arrangments more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have just fulfilled my little hentai fantasy! Oi! What a fic! I actually liked it. I could tell who you visualized even before I read it in your review. Let me tell you, I have had story ideas with the exact three in a relationship, but have never gotten around to actually writing them. You my friend have just did a very naughty thing. You started a trend, I bet. I can only imagine how many Heero,Usagi,Duo triangle fics are going to spring up now. *grin* I really did like this. I've never really read any H/U lemons, I don't think there are many out there. I had plans of making one after I finished "The Last Mission", but I wasn't too sure people would respond well to it with all the recent Usagi bashing. Ah well, can't wait for future stories, you're a pretty good writer, and I mean that with all my heart. *_~* |