Really wish there was more of this. Well-written, novel idea, interesting concept good story. Overall one of my favourite stories ever, if not my actual favourite. First story I ever bookmarked and pinned out of thousands.

I hope you are able to continue updating, this story has been amazing!

More. pacing has slowed down.
He has mostly reached his goals.

I want to see what does he dream to achieve in this epic.

I need more of this.

Pretty good. I am surprised this has less than 3k reviews.
Hope you publish again soon.

I’ve enjoyed both of your stories, having binged both in the last two months. I’m looking forward to see Swordsman take on the Players in the Star Wars galaxy. I’d love to write a fix inspired by this, using the tavern and the rules for anotherOC and the associated group of Players. I’d change some classes and worlds. The gamified aspect is great, especially since it requires actual skill and understanding rather than a bolted on system. Those have their place, and I loved your other story that included it. However, training montages and stacking abilities and knowledge from different fictional universes is fun to theory craft.

Thank you for writing, and I look forward to the next chapter!

lastly i totally want the final mission and the game itself to be somehow tied to MOG haha... that would make things full circle... like at the end of this book you can open it up for a 3rd book to complete the trilogy with a multiverse crisis plot meh whatever

ugh its not that the powers and introspection stuff isnt interesting or well thought out its more about the ratio of infodump to stuff happening being really bad... like that ratio caps this fic at like a 7/10 rating imho. like those infodump heavy chapters need more spice of life stuffs. like more interaction, plot movement, or reactions to fill up the endlessly boring wall of text about made up stuff that doesnt need to mean more to a reader than its a buff versus writing a technical paper theorizing all the power systems and whatnot of these worlds. occassional omake or like side story with the mechanics of it all great... picture may be worth 100 thousand words which is why it gets away with training montage... books use timeskips to fill the time and keep some mysteries for later.

overall its a decent read. entirely too much crunch to fluff imho. our boy needs heart badly. like this fic suffers hugely from too much Tell and not enough Show trap. Explainations and breakdowns work in comics and anime because they are simplified and generally rare between chapters. this fic is like reading a dr stone focused on optimizing a video game character... which is what anyone would do but i think a lot of the babble about how the powers work gets lost in the wall of text infodump. like babylon didnt mean anything to me until it got used for something interesting. reading dozens upon dozens of chapaters of what is essentially a gigantic training arc has been a mild letdown. dont get me wrong, writing is great and the player community and setup was awesome. mc background works and every step was great in terms of where he went and what he did... its just do we really need an explaination about every little thing when the reader brain just goes its a cool buff...? meh.. i think story lacks depth of connection to others... like the best parts of the story are MC interacting with other players and their reactions to canon plot.

i think he just needed a girl/partner/pet for the journey more... like i want him to build his own crew... im sorta missing him having Gon and Killua around... he needs his own Ebon Hawk crew and Mass Effect away mission squad imho.

anyways i think overall the story got a lot better after Nen was mostly done... but our boy still ends up wasting what feels like entire chapters of him doing training montages... ugh works for pictures much better than words

anyways thanks for sharing. look forward to who those someone(s) are? dude totally gotta get a harem, even one sided, if only for the player chat trolls to loose their minds lolz

Hope all is well.

lol i had a total tropic thunder moment in this chapter.

this is about a dude. MC pretending to be a dude Jedi who is now pretending to be another dude Hunter and is now in a game which is like being another dude as well

our MC is like a freaken onion man

never read HxH so interesting. bomb dude is definitely the villain in glasses.

only critique is that im kinda dying for like adult level stuff so cant wait for like clone wars and avengers and stuff

Love the story as always hope everything is ok with you

If you want more ideas for your star wars arc you should watch the clone wars from 2003-2006

If you want some more ideas for this star wars arc you should watch clone wars from 2003-2006

Hope you’re okay, and while I would love to read a chapter soon, because this is an awesome story.
I also hope for your success and joy in general. Hope you have a great year.