Reviews for Unfinished Business |
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Deal With Itt chapter 1 . 10/15 really good 1st chapter i hope you continue this |
Richard Adelson chapter 1 . 8/31/2023 love this concept and would love to see the story flush out around 200-300k words |
Antigoboy chapter 1 . 11/6/2022 Reading your other fic I didn't really see any Harmony. In fact if you hadn't said it I wouldn't even have noticed. That said, I don't think it would be too difficult to do Harmony in this fic and the next, it's just getting the characters (consistently) where they should. I'm curious here, I look forward to more from this story. |
TLD110166 chapter 1 . 10/29/2022 Fractions should be fractures. Interesting start. |
Ironhidensh chapter 1 . 10/29/2022 Intriguing start! Also, I love that you are not going down the easy road of Weasley bashing for a harmony fic! I look forward to seeing what you have! |
Lord Bz chapter 1 . 10/29/2022 Hi, So... It's a "League of Shadows" trained Harry? Or something like that? I just hope you don't go full crossover. Or more like you properly establish whatever organisation trained Harry so it fits the HP universe. Apart from that, the hook is interesting though maybe I'd have thrown in the name of Harry's enemies at the end, to further... *Furbish* it. Without necessarily explaining who they are yet but, you know, to give the full course to the readers in the first chapter. Good writing to you, |