Reviews for Heart of Iron |
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TalonScythe chapter 21 . 9/19/2023 Taking everything I've said previously, seeing the budding effect of the relationship unfolding between Shirou and Morgan. It really paints the profound effect they (as well as Artoria) will have on one another. Which while expected, is good to see. As well as some details and foreshadowing of whats to come in the future once Morgan's aspects start rejecting one another. Even setting up the connection to Vivian too Nothing else to add or comment on. I just feel the setup and explanations for the way things are and whats to come was a solid foundation point. It makes what's to come have a bit more intrigue and investment. Looking forward to more. |
No-One chapter 21 . 9/18/2023 I always get excited when I pop in and see another chapter has uploaded. Thanks for the great chapter! |
Gwrtheyrn chapter 20 . 9/18/2023 Shirou should get a love interest sooner or later even just in name, and I nominate Morgan |
Dimihd chapter 21 . 9/18/2023 well, many have seen Scathach in her tight bodysuit, so it's no surprise that she became a goddess. Shirou is a very simple fairy blacksmith. Everyone wants his support and weapons, not him. |
Aesir19 chapter 21 . 9/18/2023 Very interesting thought on a reason for how Morgan turned out, the conflict between a fairy soul and human form. I quite like your version of Morgan as she is now, I can only hope that in your story life and the machinations of other forces won't turn her into what she usually becomes. No idea if you have any plans for Shirou developing a relationship in time, but I really like Scathach and Morgan so far. There are not too many Shirou/Morgan (I think). |
DaDragon562 chapter 19 . 9/18/2023 Man this was a great chapter, between the history of the wastes, the details of the battle against TypeMoon and of course all of Shirou's legends and myths forming (which probably increase the mystery around him for a period of time) The intro of how the new creation entered his domain was amusing but poor Merlin probably doesn't realize how badly his plans will go up in flame later |
DaDragon562 chapter 18 . 9/18/2023 I love how things evolved with handling Dun Scaith and Scathach Recreating Rhongomyniad, hot diggity Now time for Arturia and Albion! |
DaDragon562 chapter 17 . 9/18/2023 Well shit, super cryptic, wonder what happened to Shirou and his soul here |
DaDragon562 chapter 15 . 9/18/2023 Oh shit, Scathach is full goddess mode and Avel turned into a complete wimp |
DaDragon562 chapter 14 . 9/18/2023 Well its not a total surprise but I am disappointed that Shirou was the oen to run this time vs Scathach pushing him away |
DaDragon562 chapter 13 . 9/18/2023 THis was a touching story here I enjoyed seeing Shirou still retain that part of him that strives for justice |
DaDragon562 chapter 11 . 9/18/2023 I really enjoyed the resolution with Scathach though I wonder how much she will regret thing when she's the eternal Queen of Dun Scaith |
DaDragon562 chapter 10 . 9/18/2023 I'm really enjoying how you are using tough emotional entanglements to develop Shirou's character and personality, especially the human vs fae sides It'll make it interesting when he meets Artoria who wants to be the perfect king |
DaDragon562 chapter 6 . 9/18/2023 Wonder what the consequences of him blessing her are. Will the entire world he's in form a singularity? |
DaDragon562 chapter 5 . 9/18/2023 I laughed when Shirou said he doesn't have a heart of glass. Guess since its titled heart of iron he will be different from canon based on his unique emotional pov? |