The characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. It would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life!

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece. I look forward to hearing more of your stories!

Warm regards,
Addy.

That was very well written! A few spelling mistakes, but not enough to ruin the flow at all.

And it tracks really well against canon, which is a plus for me.

I can see that happens. What Harry experiencing is quite something especially years 2 and 4-5. Well his childhood also bad. How bad we don’t know. But quite bad I think. Dursley certainly mentally abusing him. Bit physically too.

I feel like crying and crying.I too am empty inside. Really good story! But,sad one.

That was very well written! I am not a big HP fan, only seen the movies, but this approach towards the story’s main events was great!

I could easily see him grow up like this and think like this after what he went through. Nice idea, great execution!

Daym that was good writing
Although all you did was write out canon in a different perspective, well written mate!

Wow. An amazing tale! This is probably more closer to the truth than most. A very moving, emotional story. Well done!