Reviews for The Core Wars
Pointer3109 chapter 10 . 4/22
Try cubes 20 % and sweet feed,

Cows love them.
Pointer3109 chapter 6 . 4/22
I wouldn't accommodate any of his demands.
Many of the werewolf laws are over the board, but you can't give in to terrorist threats.

I would have a bounty on Grayback's head.
Pointer3109 chapter 3 . 4/22
If killing and stealing or drinking a unicorn's blood is a curse, what is killing and stealing its horn or body parts, including tail hairs? Cursed wands? Cursed weres?

These weres are up for killing anyways. It will spill over into the peaceful ones.

If a were or vampire intentionally infected me, I would kill them. Violence does beget a response.

That's some expensive alcohol.

Good story.
Grosvenor chapter 13 . 3/24
Plain old muggle? Dan Granger? Boy,is Fenrir in for the shock of his life!
TheButterflyComposer chapter 10 . 3/21
hmm. hermione is a young teenager and acts like it. that isn't a bad thing, but the adults really should be figuring out a proper rationing plan. the wands are absurdly powerful, vital and expensive things.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/27
You've never lived through a category 5 hurricane such as Camille that struck the northwest coast of the Gulf of Mexico. Most of the area was out of power for 3 to 4 weeks. I took a 55 gal. drum of gas and a portable gas generator along with a dozen volunteers from our church and spent a week in the Gulf Port area helping with the clean-up. Crime was practically non-existent. Servicers, volunteers, working class, office workers, rich, and poor worked side by side the six straight days practically nonstop while I was there. My generator ran continuously for the six days burning through the 55 gals. in 3 days. We had to make a 200-mile round trip to get the drum refilled at a refinery that donated the gas for the volunteers. People CAN WORK TOGETHER when the need is clear and competent people are in charge. JKR's people in charge of her world do seem to be VERY incompetent.
Segnoqua chapter 14 . 2/10
Thanks for a wonderful tale, Fenrir was a really interesting character and I enjoyed how you both filled out that side of the tale with various members of the pack. Keep it up, Tom and Crow!
ElsieD chapter 3 . 1/19
Yes! I have long thought, as I read fanfic, that the dragon reserves must be in fact ranches rather than endangered species sanctuaries which I feel is what is implied by ‘reserve’ in canon. Because- too much mention of dragon-hide boots and armour! What I’d like to know is how sentient are your dragons?
hagrid51 chapter 7 . 1/19
I got som'att ter say ter ya about butchered inglish, I do. Me dad, he could und'rstan me just fine, don't kno what yer yappin' on about. Now I can't listen to a word that french lassie spoke.
csheila chapter 14 . 11/12/2024
Just great. A street smart and gritty suvivor make a terrific Harry and an even better story. Here he’s hanging ten through HUGE waves. He doesn’t always win but always gets up again.
csheila chapter 13 . 11/12/2024
Cuffe’s lament about the past showed a superficial interaction with his world. He had no idea how and why the society had changed
csheila chapter 2 . 11/11/2024
I adore the focus on cotes and wood. The pencil wands might hit hard
lawshark chapter 10 . 7/18/2024
Love your stories and this is a great twist on Unintended Consequences. Hermione is obnoxious and self righteous at points in this that drives me crazy but is honestly so true to how her canon character would be in this situation! Preference the academics for wands, refuse to recognize business or financial realities….Unintended Consequences Hermione seemed a lot more mature. I am a huge Harmony fan but in this one I want to tell Harry to run for it! Thanks for the great stories and all the hard work that goes into them!
Arjayess chapter 14 . 5/29/2024
Third read through - probably last me for a while. A bit 'darker' than 'Unintended Consequences', indeed.
three points:
*Where did the wands referred to by one of the Weres in an early chapter come from? They're planning a raid and one says, "... we have a few wands ..." - but I don't think the Wand Shop has even opened at the time.
*ABC...XYZ opens his eyes in his portrait and say, "Minister Scrimgeour ...". How does he know Rufus has replaced Fudge?
** 'Brits' is seen as (at best) mildly offensive by many British people.
mariposa de cristal chapter 14 . 4/23/2024
muy interesante la forma en que diste un giro diferente a la misma historia de fondo, me gusto especialmente que un "no magico" como Dan pudiera hacer varitas tan bien como un mago y fue entretenido ver los problemas de Harry y como los resolvia, sigue adelante con tus excelentes historias, y, espero seguir disfrutando mas de tus fics, bye
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