Reviews for The Core Wars
yardchicken2 chapter 14 . 4/2/2023
Just finished reading this and wanted to thank you both for your time and talents shared!
HarryTheHorcrux chapter 14 . 3/12/2023
I love your storiesCall me immature but I still laugh every time I see the name "Little D" lol In the same sense I used to laugh whenever I saw the name "Big D" for Dudley, considering his vast weight I'd labour a guess that he didn't have much of a "D" underneath that stomach lol
Pigsfly chapter 1 . 3/6/2023
Old crow and your gang of authors: I really like your stories. Always imaginative and humorous. Thank you
HoneyBear84 chapter 14 . 2/24/2023
Loved it and looking forward to the next story. Next up for me is to read Apprentice Tom's stories and check out some of the other authors u recommend
HoneyBear84 chapter 14 . 2/24/2023
Loved it and looking forward to the next story. Next up for me is to read Apprentice Tom's stories and check out some of the other authors u recommend
PSay chapter 13 . 2/21/2023
Change is hardest for people who are older and comfortable with their lives. I imagine the survivors of the latest earthquake are totally devastated by the loss of normal in their lives. The first day after the wandout started that feeling of great loss to the magicals that woke up to no wands and no way to have a normal day because of their inability to use magic. Very well done. ps
PSay chapter 12 . 2/20/2023
I'm looking forward to more of this story. I'm glad that Connie and Anna are satisfied That Amelia is not concerned about the final details of the Wandout. Not giving the public the whole truth in this case would be a bad thing. This way no one will suffer consequences they don't deserve. Very well done. ps
Dr Stranger chapter 14 . 2/19/2023
Congratulations on another completed story. And thank you for sharing it with us.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/17/2023
90% overlap with Unintended Consequences. The main difference/benefit is you didn’t go through the wand making process in excruciating detail. And no acromantula web cores.
j4820 chapter 14 . 2/18/2023
I enjoyed the previous story and this one was just as interesting. I look forward to your future stories!
Keronshara chapter 8 . 2/14/2023
I like that this Wandout universe has wandmaking a lot harder of an endeavor for the Wand Shop crew, makes it feel more real. Your first Wandout universe story, while an excellent read, did seem to have things go a bit too smoothly for Harry and co. than it would have in reality. I've been enjoying this Wandout challenge and the stories that you and others have created from it. It creates a unique catastrophe for the magical world that isn't war or secrecy related, which is a nice change. I definitely have enjoyed your stories and look forward to anything you post.
Thanks for the story recs too.
Keronshara chapter 9 . 2/14/2023
From a logistical standpoint, the students should have been given their wands last. Working adults or one non-working adult per household are a higher priority than students who spend 9 months a year at school where their housing and boarding needs are met and aren't earning an income should really have been a lot lower priority than making sure every household had someone who could cook food, heat their home, have running water, and earn money. I do understand that as teenagers whose peers are currently attending Hogwarts that Harry's & Hermione's perspectives are going to be different than the adults and the Wand Shop crew often follows their hearts and not their heads. I also don't expect you to change your story to fit my view. I just wish that someone had pointed out the reality that students shouldn't be a high priority, especially when they are running low on core materials, since the 600 wands just given to the Beauxbatons students means that 600 families will have to wait longer to have running water and heat for completely magical houses, and an ability to work again for those with no nonmagical skills or who owned a magical business.
PSay chapter 11 . 2/13/2023
Wow Harry is helping people out in lots of ways. I love the help they are giving the broom making bussiness. Puts people get back to work and will eventually Bring back the Quidditch teams in Britain and Europe. Private people will eventually be able to buy brooms for themselves and their families. Very well done. ps
deckman1234 chapter 14 . 2/11/2023
Very good story. I actually liked it better then the first. Maybe because less background needed to be explained but I very much enjoyed this. Cheers:)
PSay chapter 10 . 2/10/2023
Wow! The Elves are priceless to the wand makers. They are really working hard to fill the demand but supply makes a big difference. Mr. Wick does a good job of even protecting his enemies as well as his friends. Being well informed makes a difference. I look forward to more of this story. ps
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