Reviews for The Core Wars
Baboy Ako chapter 1 . 11/6/2022
Interesting start.

It's strange to see Fudge be so cold-hearted. You expect him to be greedy and political, but this? Wow!

The Toad was killed off by someone she knows. I'm guessing either a werewolf or a muggle-born whom she has screwed over somehow. I'm looking forward to finding out.

As far as your list of projects from Mrs. Crow goes: they never end. :-) I've known people to start working again just because they needed some time away from their spouse after retirement. I am trying it myself right now, and so I am coming up with my own little projects; things I've thought about trying but never really had the time to put into it. Good luck!
kiwihipp chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
That was a real different take on the situation!
The goblins made a killing, didn’t they?
I look forward to reading more!
happylady chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
Wonderful start
Harry is going to have a hard time getting Sirius free with Fudge Still in office but at least Bones might be able to help
Thanks so much for sharing
Gloria
DerLaCroix chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
Thank you for still giving all this effort. Your stories are something I greatly look forward to and a huge inspiration to take up writing, again. (If I ever finish this stupid house... :D )
pico1989 chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
Oh boy! A “new” story. The intrigue of who skewered the pink toad will hopefully be resolved in the near future.
nfosurfer chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
I am glad to see you back sir. I miss seeing you work as usual.
Mastersgtjames chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
Another Wandmaker one? Would have been cool for them to learn Wandless Magic instead, maybe re-learn all sorts of Ritual Magic.

Keep finding myself surprised that Harry did not get any money for having been proven to have killed Riddle and through him, his followers. Either due to some rite of conquest thing or some rewards or bounties for killing the dark lord and confirmed terrorists...

Also, always surprised that the "Muggle" government does not move in to try and take control of things when the Magicals lose the ability to stop them or alter their minds... Same for the other Magical Governments that still have wands with them not moving in to try and take over.
amsev chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
VERY compelling start. I can't wait to read more! Fascinating, if dark, set of circumstances.
bluedragon of the 13 chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
interesting start to a parallel universe version of unexpected consequences.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
I’m glad you decided to take on your own challenge, since Mutt N. Feathers is only other that I know of that has. If there are any others that have, a mention in a future A/N would be appreciated.
An excellent start and I look forward to how differences increase as the story progresses.

Congratulations on your retirement and I your hands are doing well.
keichan2 chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
Interesting…
I wonder who offed the toad… Obviously someone unconcerned about the loss of a wand, so I’d guess a squib.
As a side note, I’m quite surprised that the Three Thestrals Pub was working: I’d have expected them to do the same as Dolores: hurry to Ollivander’s to get a new wand! In fact, I’d have expected the whole alley to be in panic after failing to get said new wand…

Thanks for sharing!

I hope to read more soon!
Red Phoenix Dragon chapter 1 . 11/5/2022
A good start to a new path for the story.
Baelorfan chapter 1 . 11/4/2022
You had me at Stupid anti-Muggleborn rules".

This Harry seems far more savvy about business. I am glad that you filled in the gaps about James Potter pouring out his family wealth as an offering to Dumbledore. Harry has no money except what he has in his trust vault and what he gathered from the Death Eaters.

He is of course conscious about the need to rebuild his family wealth. The sale of the basilsk is proposed by Barchoke. If he prices his wands right for the domestic and European markets, he can make money. He got cheated by the French and German foreign wandmakers turned resellers who made millions from reselling Harry's and Hermione's wands.

Minerva's early death made some decisions faster. Such as sending back the students, youngerstudents first, then the older students by thevFloo network. It helped that the Floo network was up and will remain up for two weeks.

Yes, this Fudge is concerned about bribe money and staying in power. I foresee trouble down the road even with the desth pf Umbridge. No need for Harry to tell even Amelia Bones what happened afyer the Third Task.

I am glad that you fill in gaps, such as Harry's conversation with Hagrid. The introduction to the Grangers went much better.
amortentiate chapter 1 . 11/4/2022
Interesting. Definitely interesting.
Wolfric chapter 1 . 11/4/2022
Seems like a good start. Thanks for writing. W.
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