this is an awesome story. please don't stop writing.

I have read this story more than 3 times and absolutely love it. I cannot wait for your next update but true genius and inspiration to get the next the chapter right takes time. Till next time!

this is an awesome fic. I hope you continue to write. Thank you for sharing your writing with us.

First: nothing breaks the immersion faster than a 40 year old man blushing.

Second: While canon harry does have saving people thing or as Dumbledore says doing the right thing rather than the easy thing, but clearly your Harry doesn't. Your Harry decided live his own life with his family isolated from the ministry and the wizard world, unlike canon harry who wanted and did become an Auror. So the decision to go with Death's plan is not something your Harry would have done inplace of finally reuniting with his family.

Third: His wife was pregnant when she died so clearly their marriage was a loving one. So him not even try to ask if not the others than atleast bringing Ginny should be allowed. Even if she refuses it atleast he would have asked. But this harry didn't even do that for one thing both canon Harry or your harry wished and would have died for- FAMILY.

In this chapter is still a small error. In chapter 6 eddard stark claims daemon as the son of brandon and in the latest chapters you wirte that he claims him as his bastad. Other than this small error great story and cant wait for anptzer update.

I love this story, can't wait to find out what happens.

Really hoping this gets updated again soon, i like where it is going. I know alliances are often forged by marriage but I still kind of hope you pair him with Dany. Thanks for sharing your writing!

It is a bit confusing that in some chapters he is Jon, Ned's bastard, but in the one where they discussed the plan and this one he isn't. I kind of hope you go back and edit to correct this since I can possibly see myself going back to this for rereads as it gets updated.

Stop starting your sentences with "And." It's a conjunction word meant to combine two sentences not start one.

Great chapter, Ned really needs to think about the bigger picture... I look forward for them to visit the Wall

I was hooked from the first chapter. I cannot wait until your next update.

Aemon and Dany - I do not know what are your plans for them, but I can't help but hope to see them together.
Viserys - well he did get what he deserved.
And it looks like there might be more dragons in the future - nice surprise at the end, Blackfyre as well I guess :-)

A lot is happening - Margaery - she would be most likely the best strategic match for Aemon - securing the allegiance of the Reach - The
Food Basket of Westeros along with the largest army. But I still hope for Aemon with Daenerys, I like her - but not the foolishness that became of her in the show.
Also Brienne - interesting addition, I admit that I did not think about her until now, but I look forward to see more of her

Amory - good riddance

So Marwyn enters the scene - he is usually interesting character