Reviews for Champion's Date |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this telling of Harry's life and times. Having a trio of Harry/Hermione/Flure is in my top 5 romance groups. Harmony one (almost any 1): Plain Harmony: Plain Haphne: Harry/Multi (over 5 gets too weird): Thanks for writing! Thanks for feeding my fantasies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Marietta's mother was a Death Eater? Somehow I'm not surprised. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice first DADA lesson. I half-expected Fudge to 'deny, deny, deny'; I'm surprised he changed his tune. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder how long before Mount Ron explodes and says something Harry WON'T forgive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I half-expected Dementors to show up and ruin everybody;s fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the stories have a happy, clear ending, I hate it when reaching an open ending... it like you hang on a cliff by your finger tips...not fun at all! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lot of details seem to be placed only to be forgotten later on. This felt kind of like a smutfic without the smut? Like all of the chapters were written solely as setup for smut, and then you just faded to black every time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool. |
![]() ![]() Honestly, this bothers me a little... it's hard to consider it a Harry/Hermione/Fleur when it seems like Fleur and Harry will only have sex for Fleur's well-being and not for love and it doesn't seem like Hermione and Fleur are going to do anything together... I hope love comes, if not, this is a Harry/Hermione with sex without love for Fleur. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alas, the quality of the dialogue didn’t improve all that much and I found a lot of unecessary conversations made their way into the final piece. This story could definitely benefit from a thorough rewrite. Still, the plot was somewhat interesting despite the short length of the story. I only wish the epilogue had been more detailed as I found it to be quite vague. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is full of some of the cringiest, most childish, and unrealistic dialogue I have ever come across. I have had to stop reading on multiple occasions already due to second hand embarassment, and I’m only halfway through the chapter… The previous chapters weren’t much better with their dialogue, so I can only hope it improves as the story progresses. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A FANTASTIC story! Thank you so very, very much for sharing it with all of us. Until next time, take care, and stay Happy, Healthy and Strong! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Slightly anachronistic. In 1996 there was basically NO airport security. Anyone could walk to the gates. Fleur would have been waiting at the gate. Basically metal detectors were all you had back then and that was only to prevent weapons...and they were mostly a joke. Definitely didn't have the hours long lines we have post 9/11. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story. Its very similar to another story I read but also different as well... Good work I enjoyed reading it! |
![]() ![]() Um...? How does Hermione get pregnant two WEEKS after Fleur, but has the baby two MONTHS after her (not) rival? End of September sounds right for Fleur. Two months later means Hermione was preggers TEN and a half months. |