Author plssssss update immediately! Don't leave us in a cliff hanger!

Yesssss I have been waiting so long for this can’t wait for the next chapter

THE STRAW HATS! THE STRAW HATS ARE HERREEE!

peak as usual keep it up.

Aside from the murder shit, which I just deleted from my brain because it pissed me the fuck off don't ever write that bullshit again, this is actually pretty good, you should continue writing man, and this is your first time right? great job. hoping for more chapters. thanks for writing this.

See, you didn't even touch on the subject again after the previous chapter. So fucking useless, used a controversial non-canon shit as filler for no fucking purpose, what a shitty chapter the previous one was.

Chapter 23:

And the way you ended it, that was clearly a one time thing, like you just used the "luffy kills" as a filler for more wordcount, that was so useless.

for the next chapter:

Cringe, this chapter just ruined the whole thing for me, change this, why go this route at all. So unnecessary and forced. And you say he is, but that was the only way to stop Kaido, he was forced to do it, and before he even stopped Zoro from killing and is against any such acts. This is so OOC, and Luffy seems so weakwilled here, wtf did you smoke.

Why go this route, honestly does not make sense, goes against what Luffy is. And your reason is also not that good, the people in onepiece are sturdy by nature, so an attack of that nature like in the opening where Luffy punched a ship would not have killed anyone. This just ruins luffy for me.

If you knew, then why add it? Luffy seems too nerfed in the haki department. You already made him OP af compared to the rest when he beat Almight, seems kind of weird to go half-assed in this part.

hey loved the chapter, can i get the link to the discord please?

Love the new chapter it's great! Hopefully luffy cracks togas head open next he sees her ;). Can't say I like the fact the rest of the strawhats are here tbh kinda preferred it as just luffy in this mha world. But all In all thanks for the hard work on the new chapter!

Just found out about this story and I can't believe you stopped at the point the Straw hats finally make an appearance

Zoro leading the way there is no way they would get lost

PEAK IS HERE!

Yessssss, love this story.
Pros: EVERYTHING
Cons: Nothing, (Ida pulling out shave seemed a little random, just a little thing though)

(Random idea: If you end up including St Saturn in this story the heroes who saw Overhauls monster form should get some minor PTSD/confusion at the similarity.)