Come back ahhh I miss you so much. I want to read your wonderful story again... I'm a super mega fan of your story... I hope you can make a next chapter... And don't give up on this wonderful story.

Can someone make a reaction fic for this fic, cuz that wud be cool

it was awsomeeeee! WOW...im sooooo glad i decided to read this!

Merry Christmas!
Great History!

Not biased at all Luffy stomps MHA

BRO THIS WAS SO WELL DONE! AAAHHHJEJWHSHHE-
You are literally the only author that I stayed up reading this fic until 6 am, holy shit, bro you did this fic so well! I love this, please continue it when you can please, this is so goodd ️️ having Momo and Luffy be siblings honestly fits in a way, they do give off sibling material if you were to force the two to meet, lol
One thing I always keep remembering everytime I read the interactions between Momo and Luffy is the fact that, in the dub version of the 2 characters, both Momo and Luffy are both played by the same English actor (I think), so when I had that in mind it seemed so funny to me everytime, lmfao
ALSO ALSO- THE WAY LUFFY BROKE DOWN FROM THE MENTIONS OF THE STUFF IN HIS ROOM UUHGGGGSHSHSHSH- LUFFY WOULD DEFINITELY HAVE A ROOM JUST LIKE THAT! A ROOM FILLED WITH MEMORIES OF HIS FRIENDSSS AAUYGGEJJSJS-
God, you have no idea how badly that moment struck my heart, and the only way for Momo to get luffy back up again is by EXCHANGING THE FRICKING ALCOHOL CUPSS LOORRRRDDD I LOST MY MIND READING THATTT️️
I've never read a fic that's made me feel this way, you portrayed the characters PERFECTLY. Albeit, not a big fan of the whole 'killing' thing with Luffy, but that's just a small pet peeve from me, and besides all of that, I genuinely think this fic was amazing, like.. this was stunning, you have no idea.
You're probably busy and might not have too much time to read this, but I beg of you, whenever you feel like it, please continue this, this fanfic has so much potential and I'm pretty much just curious on what happens next and how Vegapunk will get Luffy back to his friends. Anyways, AWESOME fic, and I hope you have a good day/night!️️️

"(I'm not gonna bother with learning his name)" HIS NAME IS KOSEI TSUBURABA, GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

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Holy shit! Having Momo break Luffy down and setting up the sake ritual to elevate their relationship is PEAK FICTION!

Yikes. Momo's dad really ripped Luffy a new one. Though I do understand where he's coming from, he coulda been more sensible and see that Momo's only been getting better with Luffy around. Guess being absent ain't doing him any favors.

Gear 5 undisputed GOAT transformation dgaf what anyone says

Aww. I hope Luffy and Momo share a cup of sake to establish siblinghood

Gomu Gomu no PLUS ULTRA is cold af

Whens the next chapter?

I wanna say luffy becoming more edgy is alright seeing as he is far from the straw hat crew so it could be he might be going a little crazy but its not bad maybe turn it down a little more

I hope this gets an update. This story does an amazing job at characterizing Luffy without making him an edge lord