Reviews for Luffy is lost in the MHA world
SakuraAnne7583 chapter 7 . 12/1/2022
Can momo join on our one piece adventure please?
SakuraAnne7583 chapter 7 . 12/1/2022
Luffy wanted a sister? Awww!
GoldQuartz chapter 2 . 12/1/2022
I have an idea for what forms Luffy could use for each fight (my opinion). Sports festival shouldn't go beyond Gear 3. Stain shouldn't go beyond Gear 3. Gear 4 (Boundman, though Snakeman could work) against All Might. Forest Training around Gear 2 with all the running around. If it ends here, Gear 5, if not, Gear 5 can still be used, but I'd recommend Gear 4 (Though Gear 5 would still be really cool).

If it continues past AFO. Provisional Licenses could have Gear 4, though not recommended, maybe against Gang Orca. Overhaul (if he faces him at all, or with or without Deku) Gear 4 with a Gear 5 reference. If he fails the Provisional License and isn't in the raid and instead at the remedial, no forms, just him being silly. School festival is up to you, he could make a Gear 4 appearance as an attraction in the Song, or he could make it completely insane in Gear 5. Joint Training I would like to see Gear 5, like he's training it and he could be against everyone at once in Gear 5. Endeavour Agency shouldn't be above Gear 3. PLW I haven't watched yet but could go into Gear 5, but Gear 4 would be more appropriate against incomplete Shigaraki.

This goes into Manga, so it can be done, just spoilers. Tartarus Escapees should go Gear 2 against Izuku, like he's testing his resolve and ultimately winning. The UA traitor could have Luffy being in disbelief, but also understanding why he did it, like Usopp or Robin. Final War would be Gear 5, but being seperated and not being where he's meant to be (at AFO). He's also the counter against Kurogiri with his Armament and Obeservation.
GoldQuartz chapter 7 . 12/1/2022
I saw a review talking about having Jinbei come along, and it's a great suggestion and I think it should be implemented, you know, as a sort of confirmation that Vegapunk's working on a solution, so that Luffy doesn't start losing hope. (Imagine Bonney going in place of Jinbei, with her eating just as much as Luffy and being Luffy's hype man)

Also loved how Nezu lied and how it was written, very nice.

Also, I think Momo should try to confront Luffy about the experimentation, then ultimately find out the truth and starts training under Luffy (cause let's be fair, Luffy isn't getting stronger in this)
Deagle135 chapter 7 . 11/30/2022
Man luffy knows how to throw parties
jetslinger333 chapter 7 . 11/30/2022
I’m liking this as something lack in the canon as even during training someone should have proposed a party or break for bonding experience just for fun.
Gold chapter 6 . 11/30/2022
I like how Luffy isn't really nerfed, rather he pulls his punches to not permanently injure nor kill his opponent. He definitely went overkill with what was basically the punch that sent Hybrid form Kaido flying, though this was not drunk Kaido.

Don't stop this nor put this on hiatus, it's annoying when Authors stop writing really good stories, especially when said story has a premise that I can tell is in decently high demand, like more OP and MHA fanfics with actual good plot and powerscaling. Trust me, when someone says they're going on hiatus, it's a permanent one.

Also, Luffy demonstrating to Momo the true power of Haki when they're alone, like Luffy could dent a wall with Ryou that All Might would have trouble denting, then obliterating it with Conquerors Infusion.
Trueopulence chapter 7 . 11/30/2022
RedBurningDragon it's actually never been straight up said in story if the cop has a lie detector quirk it's just something the fandom assumes he has because his sister has a quirk that can tell if you are lying

On another note as for the whole experimentation stuff talk about a misunderstanding that's gonna spiral out of control later on
rosetrang628 chapter 7 . 11/30/2022
well I am glad luffy finally got his party, and is well taken care of by Momo's family. I am just a bit curious about internships and how would you go about it as I highly doubt any regular hero is able to handle looking after luffy for the week etc and he does need to be supervised or luffy will do something crazy.
That being said Luffy wouldn't listen to anyone either, might it be best if the strawhat crew would send one or two of them to mha to look after luffy while they are stuck there while they figure out a way to bring luffy back with Vegapunk or something. I think it should be Jimbei considering he is one of the older reasonable diplomatic members even though new, he would be able to go along with nezu explanation of experimentation and make the story more believable given his appearance as a fishman. Though Chopper could maybe come as well considering if the story reaches Eri It might makes sense with Chopper to help look after eri. Brook possibly as well seeing as all 3 were with luffy when luffy went through the portal and knowing brook he might feel left out staying behind came with for the heck of it. I just thought it made most sense jimbe was sent to look after luffy while he is stuck in mha while they wait or find a way home. and the other 2 chopper brook came later but they will go back to egghead and continue their adventures.

I mean luffy won't be lost in mha forever right? he still has his dream and he needs to be pirate king and he has his crew that cares for him on the grandline he will eventually has to go back. and when he does he would likely give his position as rep to iida. Sunny is waiting after all. I was wondering if the strawhats would come or one at least to look after luffy. I mean the school and momo's family are doing a good job so far, but this is luffy we're talking about if no one is there to keep an eye on him he will get into trouble. So it might be a good idea if one of the strawhats come to look after luffy while he is here granted it took a while for them to come is time moves differently for both worlds. thats why it took a while for at least one of luffy's crewmates to come for luffy. Not to mention the school needs extra security and since luffy is attending U.A. for the time being it might make sense to hire the crewmate that came to supervise luffy so he won't do something crazy in mha as a guard for the school jimbe can be the guard as he has experience as a royal guard for his kingdom and he probably can teach the students a bit about combat in hero training too. Chopper can be helping recovery girl at school, and brook can possibly start a music class so the hero students won't forget to have fun and how to make the people happy and smile.

I think Luffy will eventually return to the grandline and continue his journey and I get in the meantime while waiting to return he will have adventures and fun with the class 1-a before going back and everything but the strawhats will come for their captain and they will have one of them to supervise luffy in the meantime.

Please I am curious luffy will get back to the sunny right? and is it possible the strawhats will come into the story or 1 at least to supervise luffy during his stay in mha world before he goes back to the grand line. As I think it makes more sense than luffy taking an internship, though he might if an alternate version of someone he knows from one piece is in mha he might accept. because other than that I doubt anyone else can control luffy other than the strawhats themselves, and the school can only be able to look after luffy up to a point w/out help. I am just saying.
Either way best of luck can't wait for the next chapter I am excited for it. I wonder though if it makes sense for jimbei to come after the sport festival or in the middle and fearing he maybe a part of the league of villains it could be trouble if luffy wasn't there and nezu as well to resolve it it would have ended badly so while everyone has internships luffy has to stay behind to help nezu with accomodations for jimbe in the hero world while they wait for a way home.

Honestly it would be intersting what do you think? It just makes sense even if he was lost, his crew would come for him they know he is alive with his vivre card sabo made for him. And since jimbe was with luffy along with chopper brook and bonney it makes sense he goes after luffy into mha to look after him for when they go back etc. At least this is what I think makes the most sense.
CALlC0 chapter 2 . 11/30/2022
Ok so I have a funny idea. Luffy sucks at anything education related unless its food word problems.
King of Fans chapter 6 . 11/30/2022
Good chapter

Why do I have the feeling after this chapter Shigaraki will see Luffy as a mini boss he must get through/avoid to beat all might, or a ridiculously high level side boss that can be found in the early stages of the game.

Well it makes sense Luffy’s haki could interact with kurogiri’s clouds. If Luffy can punch smoker and Caesar clown with armament haki I don’t see why he can’t do the same with Kurogiri.

After hearing about gear three I am pretty sure all of class 1-A would agree Luffy’s Rubber Quirk is the most surprisingly powerful quirk they have ever seen. This is not even adding in them realizing Luffy is immune to electricity.

I wonder how they would react when they realize Luffy still has two gears left to show them?
If their jaw hit the floor with just gear three then them imagining gear 5 would be them imagining something godly. :3
For fun you can even have the characters theorize Luffy’s gear 4 and 5 similar to that of the One piece fandom before they were revealed.

I would have personally finished the fight with gear 4, but Luffy using the full power of his Haki also works.

Lastly I have six ideas for the future chapters:
1.) Luffy adding in One or two people from class 1-B to be part of his cavalry team. It would be a Nice idea to show off class 1-B a little.

2.)Luffy asking if Setsuna Tokage father is Buggy the clown. What can I say it’s a valid question considering they both have similar abilities. You can have the 1-B girl get angry at the fact Luffy called her dad a clown. If you wanna make it even funnier you can have Setsuna‘s answer to this question neither confirming or denying Buggy is her dad.

3.)Luffy meeting Ryukyu. Luffy Would be excited to meet someone who can turn into a dragon that isn’t a crybaby or trying to kill him. Meanwhile the pro hero would be interested in hearing about two people with a similar quirk as her.

4.) Sir night eye realizing Luffy can both see the future and change it. Rather this be him testing Luffy similarly to izuku, or during a fight this guy will realize Luffy is reacting similarly to him in a fight, and a decent chunk of the time when Luffy is a round the future begins to shift. It’s not every day Sir Night eye meets someone else who can see the future, and he has never seen anyone change the future before either.
5.) gear five Luffy vs all for one. If there’s anyone who’s worthy of facing an all out Luffy in MHA All for one is a pretty good candidate. On top of this I would love to hear All for one’s thoughts on Luffy’s Devil fruit awakening. He has been around since the dawn of quirks and has stolen more works and he can count, but he has never seen such a bizarre power before, or plan to ever fight again a cartoon. :3
The cherry on top is that despite all might and The seventh user of one for all placing great value in a smile this villain has had no trouble knocking the smile off their face. However, gear five Luffy mile will stand tall during the final blow.
If you want to make this battle extra special you can have all for one realizing Luffy’s powers don’t come from a quirk, and have Luffy delivering the final blow.
As for the audience you can have people tuning in and thinking it is a cartoon seeing Luffy gear 5 in action. However, if you want to keep Luffy’s identity a secret you can say a combination of Luffy’s transformation and Lucy disguise is enough not recognize it Is Luffy.

6.) Luffy being super happy learning Jirou is a musician. What can I say in Luffy eyes a musician is one of the most important roles on the crew. Even more important than a actual doctor, or Cook.
King of Fans chapter 5 . 11/29/2022
Good chapter

I can safely say the fact Luffy is class president will definitely bring some interesting events.
For example I could see Luffy using this new position to organize a few parties, and leaving a bunch of the normal class president normal responsibilities onto Iida and Momo.
The good news is I can see Luffy dividing up responsibilities between his classmates during events surprisingly effectively. Luffy understands his weaknesses quite well, can identify the skills of his team, and knows to let them take charge when they’re skill sets are needed. Meaning Momo and Iida will have a lot more headaches getting Luffy’s request achieved, but when the activity does kick in things go surprisingly well.

However, the thing I am most curious in is how Luffy would react to the animosity between class 1-A and the rest of the school. For example when Shinso and the rest of general Studies say they are after a hero course spot. Luffy would except their challenge and be more than happy to welcome them into the class if they succeed.
Although, i’m not quite sure if Luffy would fan the flames between class 1-A and 1-B’s rivalry or extinguish it?
On one hand Luffy would gladly except class 1-B's Challenge, and mite accidentally push a few of the other classes buttons. On the other hand I can see Luffy viewing class 1-B as class 1-A’s Law/ heart pirates. Essentially rivals, and allies. Meaning Luffy as class president will try to mend some of the hostilities between the two classes somehow.

Lastly I am surprised Luffy didn’t attempt to knock out the crowd of villains with conquerors Haki. Then again he likely wanted a work out
Neia Cormae chapter 6 . 11/29/2022
Pretty good story so far, and the only thing that bugs me right now is how "manly" is replaced with "mainly", and that's the only problem I have.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/28/2022
The fight was amazing mate. The chapter was fantastic, i do like you are giving luffy some bit of challenge lol cause realistically a single normal ryou punch should end this.

Also I did wished if people noticed there was no contact between luffy's punch to nomu that would have been insane.

I just got a question how much stronger are you planning to make gear 4 snakeman luffy in this compared to others.

Keep em coming and take your time man, school do be hard.
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