Reviews for Untitled
queerquail chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
Great poem. I still think it needs a good title though! How about something like 'Still Love You', 'Hole in My Heart', or something like that from your poem? I think some lines are really good.
A Weaver of Words chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
oh thats so sad... the first five lines are amazing!
bigtreydawg chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
Touching. Very nice, honestly. Great poem. I think I got somethin' in my eye *sniff*
Darlin chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
Nice poem.