my gods, I just binge read all 15 chapters and FINALLY it happened. I was wondering how it would be triggered. I love the fact you had vamp-bella/Jake. I haven't seen it done before and I'm happy my first time seeing it is in a well written story like this one. I can't wait for the next chapter, SO EXCITING!.

Oh my... I hope she doesn't become a vampire.

Hello, I’m curious how old Jacob is in this story. You said Seth was the youngest at sixteen, but in the books Jacob and his friends along with Paul and I think Jared were sixteen and Seth was fifteen. Is Jacob already eighteen in this story and he won’t imprint on Bella or is he a year younger and when her turns 18 will imprint on her? I’m just curious about his age for this story. I think it’s a great story, and I like that Seth is a little older because Brady and Collin are like twelve or thirteen when they phase. Which is I think is way to young to be thrusted with this type of responsibility.

I'm here for dark Edwarddddddddddddddd. So excitedddd

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This is so well written. I can clearly imagine this playing out and I love what you're doing with the characters. Look forward to the next.

I really appreciate the changes you made for the story, listed at the beginning of the chapter. I love your descriptions, and this is a great start. I’m eager to see how the story transforms now.