Reviews for Fool's Gold: The 97th Annual Hunger Games
Very New To This chapter 42 . 11/27
Great chapter as always!
QueenOfMorning37 chapter 42 . 11/22
Awwww, Miss Tina is stressed. I feel like she’s gonna be the next to die. We know that Chase is after her and that’s probably not gonna end well.

I love how she keeps repeating how Fleur’s death wasn’t her fault. She’s slowly losing it.

It’d be so mean of you if you made her come second. I would approve.

WHOOOOO! VINCE!

I love how they start being sassy the moment they wake up.

Tiss loves to watch the sunrise. That feels so thematic. Good for her. It’s really sweet how she makes Vince watch the sunrise as well.

Wait, Vince is going after Jem without making a plan? That’s trouble. So far, Vince has been most successful when they’ve been scheming.

Nooooooo, why is Vince Vs Jem happening now? Are they aware it’s not the final two yet?

Dammit, Vince. Don’t end your POV in such an awesome manner. DON’T GIVE ME HOPE!

It’s so sad that Bastet is searching for Aveline’s ghost. I just realised, she’s kinda like a combo between Alessio (their crush died in their arms and now they see them as a ghost) and Tremor (toxic D2 who is responsible for basically all the Careers’ problems) and Tremor from IIDY. I don’t know if I should be enjoying their Ghost!Ave arc or whether I should start yelling BASTET SUCKS! for the meme.

Wow, that escalated quickly!

If I remember correctly, Bastet was the one who started flirting with Tiss to make Ave jealous. How does that make Tiss a wannabe, Bastet? IT WAS LITERALLY YOUR IDEA!

Ugh, Bastet is so frustrating. I’m trying not to hate on them because I can see why she is the way that she is. They’ve been through a LOT. But also, the sheer levels of delulu in her POVs need to be called out.

Oooh, this fight is so tense.

The scene where Bas falls down the stairs is so funny to me because they go from just about to kill Tisiphone to falling down the stairs like a loser just because Tiss said three words and made some sadgirl faces. Tiss must be so confused by Bas’ behaviour LOL. The viewers must also be so confused.

Oh, wait! Those are AVELINE’S last words. That makes a bit more sense. But also, if I’d been in Bastet’s position, I probably would’ve killed Tiss right there because it’d be poetic, y’know, both Ave and Tiss having the same last words. I guess that’s just my evil author tendencies. I once wrote a games where both the last place tribute and the victor’s last words were “Fuck the Capitol.”

The fact that Bas can’t even bring herself to go up the stairs and kill Tiss… What’s Tiss gonna do, Bas? Repeat the magic ‘Bas, Bas go away!’ words at you?

How does Bas think they’ve won this love triangle? She literally just fell down the stairs because Tiss said the magic ‘Bas, Bas go away!’ words. That is NOT what winning the love triangle looks like. That is such a TREMOR SUCKS! moment! It’s official. BASTET SUCKS!

This chapter would be, like, 37 times better if Vince had been there to witness all of Bastet’s delulu behaviour and then they had a POV to snark about it. Scratch that. Vince AND Miss Tina. With popcorn. Make it happen.

Noooo, not Jem having flashbacks to all the dead members of the Slovenia Squad.

Oooh, Jem Vs Vince is gonna happen in the saloon. That’s cinematic.

Noooooo, this is where Chevre was tortured!

We have now reached the point of the review where I plead for Vince’s life for the rest of the POV.

“It’s not nothing. It’s the Games. It’s winning. That’s what this is all about, sweetheart.” - I don’t care that Jem Vs Vince is happening about four deaths too early. That is a VICTOR QUOTE!

Invincible Gaultier, don’t you DARE die on me! You’re too cool to die.

Noooo, not pretending the spear is a baseball bat. That’s so camp. Alexa, play Home;Run by Seventeen.

What?

Nooooo, not Wisdom’s chemicals!

No Jem! Bad Jem! You’re supposed to chemical warfare Bas, not Vince!

Wouldn’t it be really nice if Tomo had actually forgotten to pack the chemicals or better yet, deliberately decided not to because he’d deemed chemical warfare unethical, and Jem actually had nothing in his bag and Vince killed him? That would be neat. A nice subversion of Chekov’s Gun. No? Oh well.

If Vince gets chemical warfared, this is all Tomo’s fault.

It is pretty cool how Wisdom’s chemicals got passed from Wisdom to Chevre to Tomo to Jem to be used at this point. I feel like it represents the Slovenia Squad and also the fact that Tomo Metellus kept making terrible decisions.

C’mon Vince. Stop playing around. Finish the job. Then you can call dibs on all the whiskey you want. Isn’t it a shame, that while you’re taking so fricking long to kill Jem, he’s wasting all of this perfectly good alcohol.

No

Nonononono

*sighs*

Fuck you, Tomo Metellus.

RIP Vince. Well, there goes my victor pick. I suppose if they had to go out, it would be covered in alcohol and having a fist fight with Jem as they both burned to death. I’m actually really sad they’re dying. It was so satisfying watching Vince grow from someone I didn’t particularly care about to one of my favourite tributes in the games. I think they might even be my second favourite tribute after Aescelin. They had such a good arc and I really had faith that they would’ve won this thing. Like, if you’d told me back in February 2023 that I would be writing ‘Fuck you, Tomo Metellus’ above my eulogy for Vince, who was my victor pick, I would never have believed you. But here we are. Farewell Invincible. I was conVINCED you would win for a while there. Hehehe Vince pun *breaks down in tears*

RIP Jem. Fifth Place Icon! I can’t believe barbecue gorl outlasted THE ENTIRE SLOVENIA SQUAD. This is so surreal. I’m a little annoyed that Jem was so dedicated to denying Vince their rightful title of Fifth Place Icon (c’mon Jem, if you’re gonna deny them the victory, at least let them be Fifth Place Icon), but I also like that the 9M successor to Robin also became the Fifth Place Icon. That feels appropriate. As the Grand Emperor of Slovenia, Jem left a massive mark on the games - his Carpe Diem catchphrase is why I gave the Slovenia Squad its name, because Carpe Diem is the name of a Slovenian Eurovision Entry. He was a fun character to have around. I don’t think I like I’m as much as I initially did, but that’s not because I didn’t enjoy his arc, it’s because I joined Team Vince and never looked back. Also, the way Jem killed Vince was very GIANT WHALE!

Dammit, Bas, if you’d killed Tiss this chapter, Vince would’ve been the Fifth Place Icon. Why couldn’t you be bothered to go up the fricking stairs? Bastet Avarne, YOU HAD ONE JOB!

Tiss’ POV is so powerful. I love all the light imagery, and how short and simple the sentences describing her picking herself up are. I have a feeling that Bas is really gonna regret not going up the stairs.

And now, we have reached the point where this review becomes Edited Like Poland:

“She was getting closer.” Is that a Seventeen lyric? Alexa, play Home;Run by Seventeen?

We are on the Miss Tina Train now. This is probably a mistake which I will regret, but we are on the Miss Tina Train.

You know what, could the fact that Wisdom’s bottle of acid got passed around by the members of the Slovenia Squad be a reference to how the diamond gets passed around between the Seventeen members in the Home;Run music video? Is this the Miss Tina Victor Edit in action?

She was hiding in plain sight all along. This is the story… of MY BARBECUE!

Side note: Have you ever seen ‘Barbecue Monologues’? I heard it was fuckin’ transcendent.

Oooh, Chase is stalking Miss Tina. THOSE are the noises Miss Tina has been hearing.

Ummmmm, Chase? One small problem with your plan. I think Miss Tina already knows what she’s done. That’s why she killed Aescelin.

Seriously, I wonder how Chase will react now that Miss Tina has Aescelin’s ghost.

Awww, poor Chase. The people she cares about keep dying.

Oh no! The fire that Jem started is probably filling the tunnels.

This is going to end badly.

Okay, finale time! This is so exciting. I am so honoured that my daughter has made the finale, even though, realistically, I think she’s probably gonna come fourth. I’ll do some pros and cons for each tribute in District order. (Bear in mind I am very biased towards Miss Tina)

Bastet:
Pros: She is the cause of basically every problem in these games not caused by a Seven.
Cons: She is the cause of basically every problem in these games not caused by a Seven.
They’re giving Tremor. And you do not wanna be giving Tremor in the finale.

Tiss:
Pros: She’s had one heck of an arc.
She won the love triangle by getting the flip out of the love triangle.
Vince approved.
Cons: That leg injury is gonna make it tougher for her.
She feels like the obvious choice for victor. A little too obvious.

Chase:
Pros: She’s got that scrappy underdog vibe.
The power of REVENGE!
Cons: She hasn’t killed anyone yet, or really had much of an influence on the games compared to her competitors. Could it be too little, too late?
The power of GIANT WHALE! The GIANT WHALE has already claimed one victim.

Miss Tina
Pros: Miss Tina is Brat.
She’s the most successful District 7 villain since Treech himself.
The fake love letter she wrote really exacerbated the love triangle, making Miss Tina the mastermind behind the Careers being so cursed.
I know I’m biased, but I think her post victory arc would be the most exciting to see because she can’t barbecue anymore. WHAT’S SHE GONNA DO? I wanna find out.
Alexa, Play Home;Run by Seventeen
Cons: Chase is pretty much contractually obliged to kill her at this point, right?
Treech came third, LOL.

As for final two scenarios, here are a few that I thought could be interesting, since my final two picks just died this chapter and I need new ones.

Tiss Vs Bas: Career showdown. It’s personal!

Chase Vs Miss Tina: There’s been conflict between them all games so this is also personal.

Tiss Vs Chase: They’re probably the two most likeable tributes in the finale, so it would be a neat setup to have them each kill their own final boss and then battle it out.

Bas Vs Miss Tina: This one’s a bit random but I think it could really work. Both Bas and Miss Tina have chips on their shoulders because they were so frequently considered the second best before the games. They’re both so desperate to win. So it would be so compelling to create a scenario where one of them wins and the other is forced to come second. Also, Miss Tina was the one who wrote that letter to drive a wedge between Ave and Bas. If there’s any tribute who manipulated Bastet into choosing Tiss over Ave, it’s not Tiss. It’s MISS TINA. This could get PERSONAL.

Okay, when it comes to predictions, I predict a Tiss Vs Chase final two with Tiss winning but I’m hoping for a Bas Vs Miss Tina final two with Miss Tina winning.
darthnell chapter 42 . 11/22
okay um. hi ive had time to think and im still highkey stunned by this chap. JEM AND VINCE CASUALTIES GRRRAHGUH ;-; u truly shocked me with that one and by shocked i mean absolutely devastated. like i had a feeling the acid would come back into play in a huge manner but mAN.. NOT LIKE THIS :stress: i truly thought jem would make it to the finale but alas.. he gets to stop running now... what a relief :withered: ;_; what a final line for his pov, god. also i said this before on discord but i love how hectic the writing was for that scene. very in line with how things might feel when two people are on fire and also killing each other BJVFBHFHB..

...and of course that means Bastet was right and Vince isn't coming back for tiss ;-; ...I kind of expected that as soon as they promised and claimed it would be an easy kill. but. :withered: dude the amount of times and different ways I thought tiss was gonna get got in this chapter was insane. im still also shocked that she didnt? like. ok bas stalking jem was wild, i though they were gonna join up on the fight w jem and vince solely so she could watch Ave's ghost... but no, now they'll never see Ave's ghost again bc they chose to go after Tiss instead... ohh lmao thats such a cruel joke bvhjdfhv. but yeah like. I guess a cruel joke is fitting for a cruel person :hit floor: I wont lie I cackled when bas was like "lol you think you're worth coming back for?" and tiss was like "youre here" LIKEEE GET THEIR ASS LMAO. shoutout to homoerotic torture moments.. and then fucking. Tiss repeating Ave's last words.. like did she even know? I don't know man.. absolutely hysterical how badly that made Bas tweak out like that mf Glitched through the floor genuinely vbhjfdbvhj. Somedays i can still hear them falling down the stairs... incredible moment. And yeah you. really had me going there with Tiss's internal monologue in her next pov likeeee. everything being too much. She fully contemplated jumping out that window ;_; that fukcing hurt man. Awesome awesome writing. "They'd all left her behind. She could do the same." LIKE GOD... CHILLS. me when i make kind hearted characters like Vet and Tiss and then i have to watch them slip into horrifying mindsets in order to survive a little longer :withered: why do I keep doin gthis.. when wiill i learn.. probably never.. also. "Alone would keep her alive." victors are in fact inherently alone after winning :eithered: dude i cant do this...

ok i gotta touch on Chase and Valentina now.. love how Tina was lowkey losing it at first, shes. shes being. shes being chased... ehehehehe sorry bvhjfbvhd.. the gms driving them out of the tunnels.. at least i assume its them, maybe spreading the fire from the saloon. the loneliness aspect of chase's monologue rn is also so ;-; i love her viciousness though, like she's Ready to kill and maim and honestlyyy i wanna see her do it :D ..somehow i dont think it will all stop hurting once she kills valentina though. the greatest and yet most appealing lie of revenge ;-; wonder if its their footsteps that tiss was hearing at the end of her last pov there..

oh oh ! also. cannot forget to mention the sunrise bit with vince and tiss. like mannn.. first she watched the stars with brizo, now shes watching the sunrise with vince.. and like im glad she forced them into doing that because that was their last fucking sunrise :hit floor: god that hurts. another reason why i had a feeling vince wouldnt be coming back from that fight with jem. but likeeee mannnnn.. ;-; could be tiss's last sunrise for all i know.

really excellent chap rb, i know im not ready for whatever ur gonna throw at us for the finale ! im exccited and also like shaky i think its gonna be a fucking doozy.. they always are :sob: may the most miserable tribute win i guess BJHVHDFFVB
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 42 . 11/21
tina:
- "There was something in the tunnels." its me
- "she'd own up to the Two boy, sure" BHAHAHA that guy stank he deserved it!
- this bodes really well at 4 am

vince:
- "When Vince woke up that morning, she was already awake, watching the sunrise peek out at the edge of the horizon. Something close to a smile lingered on Tisiphone's lips." genuinely starts sobbingg dryheaving
- "It's too early to be happy," Vince grumbled." HAHAHA WTHH
- "Tiss glanced at them, unfazed. "For you, maybe." yeah shes a lighthouse girlie she up early asf all the time
- "Vince couldn't stand the silence. They started humming a tune under their breath, something from years ago they didn't even remember the name of." d1 music moment... clutches my head ohhhhhhhhhhh

- "It was one they knew.

One they knew well." ah fuck here we go again...
- "Nine sucks. This is long overdue." plz vince :sob:
- "Kicking Nine's ass would basically set the world back on its axis." SOBBING
- "That they were center stage, and they would be Victor.)" um chat...
- "(Showtime.)" SLURRRR

bastet:
- "(She was close. They could feel it.)" girl...
- "Every shallow flicker seemed to be her hair, every tiny shimmer her eyes…" i abhor this dyke
- "Maybe if they could hunt Nine down without him knowing, they could watch from close by?)" THAT IS SOOO CRAZY
- "Tisiphone was- was nothing but a wannabe" the way YOU made her a "wannabe"
- "What Bastet was going to do would make Ten's death look merciful" insanity
- "Their smile grew so wide it hurt. "Not for you." christ almighty
- "It had always, always been about her.)" well i guess youre admitting it now at least
- "Bastet pulled the knife back from Tisiphone's chin, shifted back, and plunged it into the festering, unhealed wound in Tisiphone's thigh." CRAAAZYYY WORK OH MY GOOOODNESSSSS
- "Tears rolled down her cheeks. "So b-be it." YOOOOO YOOOOOOO FUCKING NUTSSSSS
- PSYCHOLOGICAL DYKE WARFARE
- "What did you just say?" Bastet demanded, her voice hitting a fever pitch. "What did you just fucking say?" she is really normal about this cuhlearly!
- "They took another step back, but her heel slipped. Bastet had reached the edge of the stairs and began to tumble." YOURE FUCKING WITH ME HAHAHAHAHHA
- "They forced herself to think. The- the other one, the lesser one- she was good as dead up there. No reason to return." man in the games you should never leave a person unkilled

jem:
- "(He ran from Tomo's serene stillness. From Jest's hands pushing Jem to safety. From Chevre's mangled corpse, Jude's fluttering eyelids, Wisdom's disappearance, True's beaten body.)" hey op? kys
- "His allies were killed one by one and he couldn't protect them.)" yeah that was really... narratively ironic and fulfilling
- OOOHHHH A SALOON WE'RE GONNA HAVE A MFIN SHOOTOUTTTTT
- "His stomach flipped as he spotted two teeth abandoned on the floor, and was that- was that a clump of pale blonde hair-?" NOOOO FUCKING WAY EEWWWWWW. NOOOO CHEVRE NOOOO
- "That was fucked up," Jem told them." thank you captian obvious
- "And now you're pissed about Ten, and going to take it out on me… kinda poetic, huh?" smth smth revenge
- "It's the Games. It's winning. That's what this is all about, sweetheart." god YOU [dolphin noises]
- "But all things have to come to an end eventually. Even the fun ones." bro just called jem a fun thing :sob:
- "Another one!" they shouted, readying the spear like a baseball bat." IMMMM JFKHAHDKJVHBJSK
- "Is there more whiskey back there?" Vince called. "Are you fucking kidding me? Dibs!" SHUT THE FUCK UP BAHAHHAHA
- (What were the odds that Tomo had packed it beforehand…

Why the hell was he even wondering? This was Tomo.) HAHAHA DAWWWW
- ofc he packed that shit. real careful and meticulous. fucking loser
- "Then they looked down, and realized it had gone straight through his foot." close enough welcome back jesus on the cross
- "Vince yanked the spear out of Jem's foot and somehow that hurt even more." i cringed
- "Damn good show- you've always been useful like that-" that is gay as hell
- "Vince rolled their eyes, reaching again for their spear." THEYRE SO DONE WITH JEST AND JEMS CORNY ASS LAST WORDS LAFMNALJFDHFJS
- "Wisdom's homemade acid reached the metal, it burst into flame." OHHH FUCKKK
- "In seconds, Vince was aflame." OH SHIT OH FUCK OH SHIT NAFHAVJDVJKFBUIKHFBAEHJG
- SCREAMING
- "Jem started to panic as his clothes caught fire, too." this is mutually assured destruction babes
- "-but neither was willing to let go-" jem ill never let go!
- "He couldn't get enough air in his lungs." insert cartpasta here
- "He took one more breath, hoping it would be enough to outlast Invincible Gaultier. Even if only by a second." SPITE CAN CARRY A MAN SO FAR BHAHAHA
- "No more running.

(What a relief.)" GOD...
- ARE THEY REALLY...
- that was yaoi i have to be honest

tiss:
- "Boom.

Boom." damn. they really are.
- "(Somehow, Bastet had known exactly where to strike." i mean all a girl gotta do is look
- "(Again. Tisiphone had been discarded again.)" poor abandonment issues baby
- bas's words... brizo's words...
- VINCE'S WORDS... SOBBBB
- FAMILY'S WORDS! FUCKING ILLLLL
- "She let everything turn gray.

(They'd all left her behind. She could do the same.)" slowly turns my head at the camera OP . . .

- "She pulled her bandanna off and fashioned it into a tourniquet." ohh thats cunt i fear
- "-no. Vince was gone. Vince left too." head in hands
- "(Tiss watched it all from the side. Gray, ghostlike. Numb.

The way she should've all along.)" babygirl noooooo...

chase:
- "Chase's anger overwhelmed her." not a good sign. BABY BE CAREFUL...
- "(If she was such a good friend, where was Tye? Where was Zinnia? Shazia? Fleur? If she was so dedicated, so loyal, so good at watching everyone's back, why was she the one still living?)" head in hands
- "And if she had to choose whose blood stained her skin, her first pick was that fucker Valentina.)" smiles really forcedly
- "(And there were still traces of Fleur's blood under her nails and on her clothes…)" NOOOOO WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THIS
- "This… this was woodsmoke.

And the tunnels were filling with it." CHASE GET THEF CUK OUT CHASEEEE
- "She'd kill Valentina, and then- and then it would stop hurting." ummm...
- i fear she is getting too lost in the sauce SOBS

- "5th: jem piper, d9 (killed by invincible gaultier)" awww shit the spite paid off! fifth place icon 3

vince: goodnight to the cuntiest d1 nb ever. you killed my son and also a 12 year old but im afraid youre too funny and i cant stay mad at you for very long. they broguth so much drama to the chat literally just for shits and i have to respect how willing they were to play the game. girlbossed too close to the flames though unfortunately. it was also so fascinating to see them and tiss get close like... whats happening right now...? feelings ...? what the fuck... they shouldve been best friends 4ever. mean gay and sad lesbian(?) rip to an icon.

jem: genuinely probably the most tragically well intentioned person in this syot. your plan was not the greatest from the start you shouldve KNOWN this was gonna happen but alas... headstrong and passionate and that was 1000% ur downfall. made for such a compelling resolve to face the end though. i dont think i can blame him for trying to assemble a group of good people to keep each other safe. they all got along shockingly well too so even though it was doomed from the start it was still a lovely effort. thank you for being nice to my son and to jude;;; sighs deeply. rip jemmothy

ONE MORE CHAPTER... WHAT THE UUCKKK... im so insanely proud of you rb starts tweaking. you're bringing it home... i cant believe victor next chapter? dude what the hell. fg has been such a fun ass ride wym i have to get off now. GRHAJKJFHJSKKJJSK!

till next time,
bonkies
ladyqueerfoot chapter 42 . 11/21
okay so there's no way tiss doesn't win, right?

not going to write an essay in ur reviews and embarrass you when i'm 100% correct like i did with esper and lio but i feel equally confident with this.

anyway... that was sufficiently homoerotic. vince pookie, i will miss you so much! that's babygirl right there. jem, i will miss you too, but not as much.

both of them being dead before the finale is crazy bc i thought they'd both be there, but the d9m comes in 5th place urge is just too strong it seems.

yknow even tho i think tiss will win, im rooting for bas because well bas.
AstralKnight98 chapter 42 . 11/21
No jail for you! Congratulations! Will I become Victim of rb today? Let’s find out!

I predict two cannons. Let’s do this.

Hi Valentina! Fudge I’m shaking again. I blame Dante and the energy drink. Freaking Aescelin, haunting Tina from in more ways than one.

Oh Tina, it’s not a mutt. You’re being Chase’d!

Hi Vince!

“It’s too early to be happy.” Vince is such a mood I love them.

That sunrise scene :pleading_eyes: can they all live pls?

“this included Bastet, who was still out there somewhere.” Heh. The cat is still loose.

OH NO THEY FOUND JEM NOOOOOO!

Ohhhhhh this is it! The showdown!

Speaking of Loose Kitties: HI BAS!

BAS FOUND TISS!

This is not going to end well.

“and PLUNGED IT INTO THE FESTERING UNHEALED WOUND IN TISIPHONE’S THIGH!”

BAS NO! BAD BAS! *grabs spray bottle*

“SO BE IT!”

Oh no, Bas has gone insane. I repear, Bas has gone insane. Again.

Hi Jem! My fave!

I get the feeling whoever wins this fight is winning the whole Games. Let the battle for Victor Pick begin!

IT’S HAPPENING! Fuck I’m shaking.

KYXJFZHTSJYCJGCJS IHS IGA ITCITXIW IH SIG S! VINCE ON FIRE WHOOOOOOOOAAAAAA! DID THEY JUST KILL EACH OTHER?

Both my victor picks just killed each other.

BOTH OF MY VICTOR PICKS JUST KILLED EACH OTHER!

Oh goodness me… Wow.

Oh gosh, who’s going to win now? Oh dear me. I don’t know what to do now.

Oh poor Tiss… Oh no… WHAT IS HAPPENING!? EEEEEEP RB YOU ARE AWESOME BUT WHYYYYYY? YOU GO TISS!

Hi Chase! Oh gosh that tunnel scene was intense!

RIP Jem and Vince. These two had a rivalry thay was epic. This entire chapter was epic. Bravo rb!

I’m physically shaking rn and I still have to get back to work fudge.

I can’t believe the finale is soon. It feels like just yesterday I was discovering this story for the first time and was trying to work up the courage to review. Oh this is so bittersweet knowing it’s ending soon.

Yes. I became victim of rb today.
darthnell chapter 41 . 10/2
Ohh wha tthe fuck man the first bit of this accidentally got deleted :sob: why… why does notes app hate me . Um. I dont remember what it said im sorry :sob: something about how ut was funny to me that vince is relieved that bas is out of the picture so they dont have to deal with her i think jdjdjd. And them hoping someone else will kill bas.. but also yeah i dont think thats likely though, i think this reunion is inevitable. Ok the rest: theyre very fun foils for each other ;-; like their family lives vs training and different outlooks on that.. only child vs siblings. Divorced parents vs. dead ones LOL. Tiss’s sisters not even stealing her clothes bc they think theyre ugly kddkdkdk cryinggf.. all of the details about vince’s family life though.. the violin symphony to their parents arguing.. like maN. Thats so potent ;-; “It wasn't about the parties or the crochet. Winning the Games, it was… safety. Security. Independence.” ;—; things that both vince and tiss value so much.. im also rly fascinated by the idea of the sort of trust between these two. Like vince not feeling like tiss will inevitably betray them, and not feeling like they need to betray her first (yet at least).. its just Nice ;-;

LMAO Tina :handshake: Vince :handshake: thank god my crazy ally isnt in the picture anymore smh. Valentina heading back into the mine tunnels ouughhh.. she truly has such a neat advantage in there.. and knowing that chase is out for her blood, this makes me nervous for chase ;-; bc i think its very possible that tina might get the jump on her. Honestly that would be the biggest shock value thing that could happen next i feel like, so ive been trying to mentally prepare myself for that just in case JDKDKD. But yeah whether that happens or not idt i see tina as victor alas..

Aughhh mendi.. ;-; this was such a calm peaceful pov for her, and what a lovely one to be her last. I wasnt rly sure whether she died at the end so ty for clarifying but. Yeah it makes sense. Poor poor gal ;-; im glad she got some sort of peace in the end. Though the way you juxtapose mendi and her dad digging in the garden and her mom smiling makes me think they Totally buried her in there :skull: and i feel like thats about as much as were gonna find out :sob: but yeah the poor thing had such a rough time in 12 and for the duration of this story, im glad she got a death that was mostly peaceful ;-;

Tomo…. Goddd.. this fucking kiddd :sob: the ultimate test of his moral dilemmas, huh. Ofc its bas too.. i said this in ur channel before but it makes so much sense that theyre the one to kill tomo.. the moral compass as u said. Cant rly come back from that one…! Jem does such a lovely job at antagonizing bas here its hilarious cjdjdj.. i rly like that in the end tomo’s decision Was in fact a decision (big step! Proud of you buddy!) even if it resulted in his death/sacrifice.. in the choice between death or violence.. he sure chose. Like he ran, but he knew what he was doing ;-;

“Jem would not let another friend get themself killed for his survival.” Frog chair dance… yeah he is my strongest victor pic after this chapter LMAOOOO.. the capitol would hate it so much but like. :eyes: hey at least he wasnt the one who chose to die rather than play the games…! This whole encounter though.. jem’s spear fucking Missing :sob: im sure that wouldve saved a certain two careers a lot of pain if it had landed jdjddjdk.. this bit where bas has jem at knifepoint but is too distracted by ave’s ghost to kill him.. :withered: like they KNOW shes disappointed in bas killing an unarmed kid who would never have hurt a fly.. man the next bas pov is gonna be wild i cant wait to see how she reconciles with herself (or not) after their failure to kill jem.. hehehe.. also . “Jem Piper did what he did best. / He turned and ran.” Man you are really out for miris blood arent you.. :sob:

Not chase looking at the sky, realizing tinas still alive, and being glad bc that means she gets to kill tina herself :skull: gIRL… this is gonna. Go. Probably not well. Possibly even poorly. Following tina into the goddamn mines.. :withered: and all of this bc if she stops shes gonna have to deal with the grief of losing fleur.. ;—; shes just a kid man ! :c liiiike i dont WANT her to fall for tinas trap and get killed :sob: i dont think its out of the realm of possibilities though, i dont trust you (affectionate i promise). ..ok now if she DOES kill tina though. What then. :eyes: what then…

So much went down her and theres so much brewing still, like im so stressed all the time (but in a good way KDKDKDKD). Lots of strong possibilities for victor.. they get narrowed every update but like also man i dont envy you for having to decide :sob: last chap i was def more in the chase boat but now its jem whos really speaking to it, i dunno man it could still be vince too :sob: i cant wait to see how it all turns out though i know itll be a wild ride ! Really awesome chap arbee ! :heart:
Very New To This chapter 41 . 9/29
Great chapter as always!
QueenOfMorning37 chapter 41 . 9/24
I love how Bastet has left the alliance and their allies are starting to heal from the trauma of being allied with her. She was soooooo toxic.

Oooh, is Vince growing a conscience?

Let’s gooooo! I knew Vince would catch Tiss in the act!

That section with the violin gives me chills. Please can Vince win this?

I find it really interesting how Tiss and Vince are two COMPLETELY different people but they’re both searching for the same kind of stability in the games. Could this be… two Careers from THAT alliance who aren’t a toxic disaster together?

I love how Miss Tina is happier without Aescelin. I also love how she’s the one tribute who isn’t bothered by being followed around by a ghost.

Aww, she’s so traumatised by Aescelin burning Fleur to death.

I’m really excited to see what Miss Tina will do in the mines with her baseball bat.

RIP Mendi. I love how her final POV fit with the theme of this chapter. Her backstory and her interactions with her allies were very interesting but she didn’t have much to do after all her allies died. I kinda called that she’d be the next to die, and even the exact circumstances of her death - dying quietly of an infection without ever interacting with another tribute.

Oh no! Bastet has found the last remaining members of the Slovenia Squad!

That scene where Bastet is fighting Jem and Tomo just doesn’t know what to do is so tense!

RIP Tomo. I honestly had no idea what you were planning for him. I thought you were gonna have him use Wisdom’s chemicals to blow Bastet up, but Tomo just refusing to play the games anymore is a really cool choice for his character. I really loved Tomo and he was my favourite character for a long time but I was mentally prepared for him to go out here. I just couldn’t see a scenario where he clawed his way to victory. So I’m glad Tomo wasn’t corrupted by the games and dies without any blood on his hands. I guess that was a small victory for him.

I find it kinda funny that the two tributes who I predicted would be the next to die were the next to die, in the exact order I predicted them to die.

Also, I guess Wisdom’s chemicals and stuff is just never gonna be used now. Unless Miss Tina somehow gets her hands on it. She totally should. She would be LETHAL!

Jem is gonna be so destroyed now. He’s had to watch all the other members of the Slovenia Squad die.

Bas has FINALLY seen Aveline’s ghost. Maybe they’ll stop being so evil now.

I really hope this fight doesn’t lead to a Jem Vs Bas final two, because as satisfying as that would be for Jem’s victor arc I am still on the Vince Train and I am not ready to get off.

Uh oh, Chase is hunting Miss Tina. I do wonder who would win this fight. Because on one hand, Chase has so much main character energy and she hasn’t really done anything yet so she kind of HAS to win but on the other hand… she’s seriously underestimating Miss Tina. Seriously, Miss Tina was not the sidekick. She scored a fricking home run with Aescelin’s skull.

Hmmm, maybe if Miss Tina wins this, she should get into baseball.

I’m very excited for Chase Vs Miss Tina. I wanna see Chase’s reaction when she finds out that Miss Tina was the one who killed Aescelin.
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 41 . 9/23
vince:
- "Life was- unsurprisingly- much more peaceful without Bastet around." unsurprisingly indeed
- "It sounded incredible, and a tribute could dream, couldn't they?)" they can definitely dream yeah!
- "Worst case scenario, they could use her as a human shield, right?" PLEASE?!
- "For some reason, though, Vince couldn't help but find that… unappealing." for some reason? its almost like youre FRIENDS
- "Vince tried to remember what they'd heard of sibling dynamics." theyre such an only child LMFAOOO
- "Not really. They think my clothes are ugly." BAHAHHAHA SHE PROBABLY DRESSES LIKE A GRANDMOTHER
- "How the hell does your mom put up with it?"

Tisiphone shifted. "She's… gone a lot," she said" good job vincey poo
- "My dad is- a lot, but he's never made me take care of whole entire people," they said." parentification is a whole nother beast
- "Everything that happened before the Reapings feels… far away, like it happened a long time ago. That's probably why." uh huh
- "Training is a duty and a privilege, and being selected as a tribute is the greatest honor of my life." IM CRYING WHY ARE THEY SUDDENLY A ROBOT AJKFHDAJK
- "They tuned it quickly, then closed their eyes, listening to the voices below. Thin legato notes for their mother. Deep, curt notes for their father.

They played along to the argument, a symphony in their head, for hours that night.)" this is a really great coping strat
- "Vince shook their head. "You're still naming things you can do without the Games." district Four is so bad at going into the Games with a reason bruh
- "you can have parties without winning the Games, too." true get their ass
- i miss true
- "As they packed, Vince couldn't help but think to themself about how much easier this was. Just one other person- a quiet, relaxed, sincere person." thats called having a friend vince

valentina:
- "It was remarkable how much more tolerable the arena was without Aescelin." this place is kinda nice when u dont have a spiritual freak psychopath in ur ear telling u its not
- "She'd loved killing him." even more than you love barbecue?
- "In the most important way, it hadn't.)" im going to weep
- barbecue Horror
- "So she hefted Two's baseball bat over her shoulder and, once again, descended into the mine tunnels." god whats she planning...

mendi:
- bryony ;;;
- "The river washed her clean again, and again, and again." girl ngl u never gon b clean
- did she just drown herself

tomo:
- "He waved Tomo off, squinting down at a hangnail he'd been trying to remove all day." that shit is mad annoying i dont blame him
- "Shit, Tomo, you gotta lead with that!" JESUS FUCKING CHRzIST HAHHA
- "Do what you think is best, Tomo. I won't blame you." head in hands
- "I," she said, "am going to make you regret ever Volunteering for these fucking Games." BAHHAH
- "And then, just when you think it can't hurt anymore?" They smiled, but it didn't reach her eyes. "I'll show you real pain, fucker." unhinged
- all for a girl u supposedly didnt give a shit about ok! /lh
- "(Tomo refused to play the Games by their rules.

It was about time he stuck to his own.)" you know what! good for him.

jem:
- "It was Jest all over again. It was Chevre all over again." withered im so withered i miss them
- "This was not the type of person who would let Tomo slip through her fingers." slipping thru my fingers all the time i try to catch your every miiiinute...
- or however the song goes
- "Now, it felt just as familiar as a stack of papes." STACK OF PAPES
- "He laid there, trapped." head in hands christ
- "(Was this what Jest had looked like, when he…)" STOP INVOKING HIS NAME
- "I'm not playing."

Two stared back at Tomo, baffled. "The Games? You're not playing the fucking Games?" sorry i laughed
- "Tomo tilted his chin in perhaps the only act of defiance Jem had ever seen from him." SHIT OKKK I CAN FW THIS
- "The spear missed Two's head by inches." sigh
- rip tomo
- "He wasn't gonna hurt you!" he screamed" yeah well
- "But Two's eyes weren't meeting his. They were on something just behind him." oh you sad fucking lesbian
- "(Maybe Tomo had something right. Maybe the biggest act of rebellion was not to play the Games at all.)" wow maybe that homo said something worthwhile after all
- "Jem could see the head wound making her blonde hair stringy and tangled, the various cuts and broken bones scattered across her body." :::(((
- "And now Tomo had, too." deep sigh
- "Two was still frozen on the ground, blade in shaking hand, staring at the One girl's ghost with wide eyes." bas oh my god girl... ngl u embarrass me
- "Jem Piper did what he did best.

He turned and ran." head in my fucking hands
- jem everything rides on you now
- the alliance is really donezo now but im glad you carry it all on your capable shoulders
- even if you definitely think you led everyone to their deaths
- and even if thats exactly what happened yeah

chase:
- oughgh.. my darling girl
- "Two faces appeared- the district partner Fleur was fond of, and the small one from Twelve." fond of ;;; the thought of mendi drowning herself is so acutely misery inducing wow
- "Valentina was nothing more than a wily-spined piece of shit sidekick, after all." WEEPINGG
- "When she stopped to rest, the memories of Fleur's burning skin and fading dimples filled her head, and grief overcame her again." i feel fucking ill man
- oh god not the mine entrance
- "A small, vicious smile stretched across her lips. Her hesitation disappeared." SHES HUNGRY FOR SOME BARBECUE BITCH!
- SHE WANTS THAT SMOKE!
mendi: rip girl you were insane but it was pretty easy to imagine u as a scared little girl and the visual of u dying like that is really haunting and sad. at least you are with your mom now. the mom that i think you killed but i digress. i dont know if you went to heaven but i think anything after would be kinder to you than real life

tomo: mr hamster actually stuck to his mfin guns! so proud of him. hes actually so rigid that hes unbreakable. we love to see it. siccing bas on him is really funny damn i love to see submitters with two kids get one merced by the other. haha see what i did there. anyway. loved tomo a lot he fueled a lot of funny as shenanigans and i smile thinking about his awkward ass interactions with my son. good job he actually died better than all of it

m’baby: jesticles
OBSESSED: chase
love!: jem
CUNT: vince
catsmirk: tiss, miss tina
uh: bas

LOVE YOU RB! THANKS FOR WRITING! SO HAPPY TO GET YOU BACK, HAPPY TOP SIX EVERYONE!

till next time,
bonkies
AstralKnight98 chapter 41 . 9/23
Eep I'm scared

"Life was- unsurprisingly- much more peaceful without Bastet around." We're not even a sentence in and Bas is already catching strays.

Vince, you're prying my friend. Tiss, you're dodging. Oh, this is not going to end well.

"It was remarkable how much more tolerable the arena was without Aescelin." The theme of this chapter is disrespecting former allies and I'm all for it.

MENDI HONEY WHAT IS GOING ON WHAT DID YOU DO? Yo did Mendi just die?

BAS WHAT NO GO AWAY IT'S TOO SOON!

TOMO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

NO! BAS SAW AVE'S GHOST NOOOOOOOO!

Yep, Mendi is dead. I called it. I'm also sad.

Oh, Chase is going after Tina ohhhhhh noooooooo this is going to be fuuuuun!

Okay, back to work *sobs*
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 40 . 8/27
deep sigh. and so it goes

ingram:
- tw misgendering we are off to a fantastic start
- "His son" im already tapped out gg
- invincible is so gross
- "The mentions of a "romance" with some outer-district whore were troubling" LMFAOOOO
- "It was important to surround oneself with the right sort." the face i made
- is that vince's mom
- his ex-wfe. ah yes
- "I- I only wanted Invincible to choose for hi- for themself. If this is what they chose, I'm here to support them." shes trying i guess :sob:
- "(Their son was his. He liked seeing Cicely know it.)" eugh.
- well that was absurdly rancid

sparta:
- "I know them well," Sparta replied, knowing full well she was not answering the question." BAHHA
- "(Bastet had always hated Sparta. Sparta hated Bastet now more than ever." oh fascinating. normal relationship
- "It was the closest she'd ever come to participating in the Games after failing her own selection tournament against Diana Van Zandt ten years ago.)

(Bitch.)" so is she a trainer? so funny that she has such a mutual hatred of bas
- "In our records, it says that the two of you are sisters," the interviewer pressed." ohhh... very fascinating
- "An unforeseeable tragedy," Sparta lied." HAHHA... UNFORESEEABLE...
- "the rectangular plot of fresh earth behind the facility wasn't exactly subtle." oh. thats not concerning
- "Sparta nearly choked, but forced herself to stay relaxed." BAHHAHAH
- "Sparta hated Aveline- she hated Aveline's perfection, her dumb blonde hair, the stars in her eyes and the ease of her smile- but she did it anyway. She even let Aveline cry on her fucking shoulder, which was ridiculous, because half the time Aveline was crying about something Bastet-related instead of training-related." IM WEEPING. THIS IS SOOO MESSY
- POOR AVELINE
- - "Sparta did it all. Everything that Nyx asked of her." damn she just been a total tool her whole life
- "(She was glad Nyx hadn't lived to see this outcome, where Bastet was somehow the best of all of them. The woman was probably rolling in her shallow grave as it was.)" god this is such a funny paragraph. its just effortlessly brutal
- "How could Bastet think about anything but Aveline, when that was what they'd been told to do their entire life?

Sparta didn't have any good answers for that one.)" hhaahaaaa... yeah theyre a little fucked in that department
- very fascinating. i really liked that backstory dive. sighs lovingly Careers~!

alecto:
- TISS TIME
- ive heard so much about the sister interviews
- "an ugly guy with really long earlobes" BAHAHHA
- "I want to be on TV," Meg corrected him." oh my goodness LMFAOOO
- "Ally was not interested in hearing Meg whine again about wanting a pretty dress." how old is she anyway
- "Duh. We all saw them kissing," Ally said savagely. An image she'd been trying to scrub from her eyes for days." she said KISSING like it was a slur HAHHAH
- "Pretty sure it was her first time," Ally added." airing out tiss's lack of love life on tv is Craaazy work
- "She already got dumped. She better not kiss that other one now." WEEPINGGG
- "I just think they're weird. I always feel like they can see me through the screen." BAHAHHAHA
- "If she gets to die dramatically on TV and I don't, I'll be so upset," Meg declared." oh my fucking god HAHAHAH
- "No one ever comes back!"

(Not their dad. Not their mom. No fucking way Pissy Tissy would be the first." the nickname lives on even when shes cursing her out
- "She was so angry and tired of this stupid lie Tisiphone made them tell. What was the point? Tisiphone wasn't coming back. There was no lighthouse left to save.)

(But Tisiphone had always cared about that stupid lighthouse more than them.)" this is so complicated and fucked wow im loving the fuck out of this chapter so bad. makes all the characters feel SOOOO RICH...

spark:
- WHAT KIND OF NAME HAJBFAJSHFA
- "I could be persuaded to say more," he offered. "For an… exchange." CRUINGGGG
- "Odeliah," he said, "give the kid some cash." YEAHHHH LETS GOOOOO
- "There might be no one in the world who hated him more than Chase Holloway." okay nvm i dont want you to have any money at all
- Im so sorry chase i dont remember who this guy in your backstory is
- "(He refused to feel guilty for making sure he survived.)" maybe fair enough maybe
- "She can get mad," Spark said. "Really, really mad. And she can get violent, too." im manifesting for this to come out
- "So the Chase you know is not the one we've seen," he summarized. "Instead, she's a violent criminal." oh okay we're going strange places now
- NOT SHE SHOULD BE IN JAIL LOL
- "Let's hope the Games can reform her, then," the man said." YERRR JOE KINGGG
- "That girl had enough anger burning in her to keep taking swings at whoever she had to. If she ever saw his interview, she'd probably break his nose again just for the hell of it.

But for that to happen, she'd have to survive long enough to watch it.)" banger way to end this pov. god i love you chase so bad i really do hope you come back to obliterate mr. le rat's ass

teurian:
- oh god
- "Is there any chance we could film Tomo's dogs?" the interviewer asked. "The ones he mentioned in his interview? The Capitol has been dying to see them." HAHHAHA ID LOVE TO SEE THEM TOO
- "A boy came by to pick them up. They've been with him for the last several weeks." who the fuck
- are they with esper's brother
- "Teurian didn't know. Teurian didn't particularly care. "One of Tomo's friends." head in hands
- "They cleared their throat. "Your dad's a murdering copper, and you can't even think you might be wrong about him. I know the truth, Metellus. And I'm not giving up on it just because you want to pretend otherwise." CRYING THIS IS SOO UNHINGED TO PUT OUT THERE
- "but I would not describe my experience as at all violent. Rather, it has been my pleasure to ensure the safest possible conditions in my district." said the most normal Head Peacekeeper Ever
- ouh lore time
- "His plan was genius- pitting the religious fanatics against the gangs that had riddled Two for decades. They'd clear each other out, and Two would be pristine again." wow
- well. it worked .
- why the hell did he have a kid
- "I have long hoped he would follow in my footsteps. Though I'm very honored that he has this opportunity to bring pride to our district now, as a tribute in the Games." he talks in such an awful way wow
- "Is there any advice you would give him right now, if you could?" they asked.

Teurian exhaled. "None I haven't given him before," he replied. "Make me proud, Tomo. Make Panem proud." HE GIVES ZERO SHITS :sob:
- its so sad that tomo cares so much about a dad who doesnt give a rats ass about him
- "He had far more important things to do today." dear lord
- he and ingram are in a tie for the best dad ever award

florence:
- "Valentina hated it all, which meant Florence was supposed to hate him too.)" monkey see monkey do sister?
- "Valentina always said they were bad intentions. That Mr. Henry was an evil man who delighted in a teenage girl's downfall.

Valentina wasn't here, though." okay look at her being adventurous!
- "Valentina's a good kid," he answered. "And I won't talk bad about a kid, okay?" wow hes so real
- puts into perspective that tina is... a teenager
- a barbecue fanatic teenager but. a teenager
- "but she's a teenager, so…" IM SAYINGGG
- "At least she's not, y'know… doing things with that forest boy anymore." ummm... yeah! That Is Good At Least
- "Maybe some things were bigger than barbeque after all.)" IM WEEPINGGGG EVERYTHING TINA RELATED TAKES ME THE FUCK OUT

Sparrow:
- oh my goodnesss... honestly what a dope ass name
- "So when her idiot best friend Volunteered for the Games, she watched from the Refuge." ouh... bruh i always forget jem volunteered
- "So our girl, Shazia, she's got these long braids, and our guy, Jem, he's got this real curly hair and he's tall as a fuckin' streetlight." oh these are great descrptions
- "God, that's so nasty, be glad you can't see this-" head in hands
- "Uh… he's cryin'… I never know what to do when they cry…" KETSIA IS SO FUNNY HAHHA
- these povs are all so unique and delicious im so impressed rb
- "You know him?" Ketsia interrupted. "What the fuck? You never said!" BAHAHAH sorry.
- "Dude," Ketsia said, "I never would've called him a beanpole if you told me that…" i love howw THATS what shes worried about
- "Shit, lemme fix your hair." why is she the realest person on planet earth
- "A lump formed in Sparrow's throat as she realized, once again, that she didn't believe them." head in hands theyre never gonna let him win are they

marus:
- "After six months without a body, they finally let him go." he hid that shit good
- ah someone made his house a shithole while everyone was away
- oh this is fucked that he doesnt know shes gone
- "(No. He wouldn't answer their questions. He'd been interrogated relentlessly by anyone and everyone about his wife, and it was none of their business. They didn't deserve to know. They had earned the right to nothing but his silence.)" he has had a Real shit go of things oml
- "(All the world would ever get from Marus Navar was silence.)" personally i think hes really real for that

m’baby: jesticles
OBSESSED: chase
love!: tomo, jem
CUNT: vince
catsmirk: tiss, miss tina
uh: bas, mendi

fantastic content as always rb. i devoured that.

till next time,
bonkies
darthnell chapter 40 . 8/23
CATCHING UP NOW WOOOH!
This tw. Withered. Fan favorite friendship with Four omggg ! INGRAM’s hard work? Bitch. This guy fucking suuuuucks. Ex wife omg… loving the glimpses into vince’s home life.. it seems so miserable..!

Ohhh word.. sparta… always hated bastet, this is gonna be fun..! Adopted sister ooh.. more like trainer.. man this is such a messed up dynamic between sparta and bastet and ave and nyx :sob: rly fascinating though..

Augh. Hi alecto.. oh this was. Really miserable. Theyre so…. Theyre pissed but also almost petty? Aughh. Terminally 15.. they hate her so much hhhh ;-; meg stop telling everyone you wanna die in the games ur so stupid :hit floor: both of them dont care if she dies from her injuries… head in hands. “No, Ally knew how this song and dance went. It was her, Meg, and Elpis now. They were on their own.” WITHERED. “But Tisiphone had always cared about that stupid lighthouse more than them.” MANNN. ill see myself out now.

SPARK LE RAT LMAOO.. ohh shit hes the rat. Yeah he sure is the rat. “Spark nodded. "She should be in jail," he said. "Trust me, I've tried. District Five would be safer with her and her gang off the streets.” Ohh. Youre gonna get punched again for that i fear.

Sheesh Teurian.. well. Its not like we didnt already know he was an asshole. Thanks for the backstory though, loved the details..! I hope he gets shot on the job, since its so important to him. Hed probably be honored. Glad they rescued the dogs from that man.

Heeeelp this is so funny… Tina’s rivalry being outed as completely one-sided cjdkdkdk im crying.. like it makes sense though LOL. Hes a grown ass man, he wouldnt consider her a sworn enemy fjdkdkkd. The drama.. obsessed. I like that in actuality her sworn enemy is just like. Trying to help. And is still trying to help back home. Good stuff.

Help why am i obsessed with Ketsia.. her commentary is so good.. so real and raw. The Refuge sounds absolutely miserable jesus.. except for Ketsia. Oh.. i do not like that interview question ohh nooo.. personally kicking miri into the corner :skull: the implications of this are uhh. Bad. For jem. Head in hands.

Oohh mendis dad.. oh man they let him free.. no body.. what da hell… interesting tone here. Im so. Unsettled. Hh ppl have been in their House.. aughh the blankets on the bed.. ;-; goddammit rb. Thanks so much for your silence mr navar now nOBODY KNOWS… you (rb) are never gonna tell us are you. God damn narrative baiting kfckkddkdk..

Really great chap.. loved getting a second insight on all the kids its so well done and also miserable yayyy! How are u ever gonna kill seven of them…
AstralKnight98 chapter 1 . 8/20
INGRAM NO ONE LIKES YOU!

NYX NO ONE LIKES YOU EITHER! I like how Sparta is just confused about everything.

Sisterly love. Gotta love it. Pissy Tissy. That’s an ouch.

SPARK LE RAT YOU LITTLE RAT! Well he certainly had a lot to say about Chase.

Teurian YOU SUCK TOO!

LOL MR. HENRY IS SO CONFUSED! The Gammons must have had a RIDE during these Games.

Some things are bigger than barbaque… Yeah like torching poor Fluer and making Tina not want to be a bbqueen anymore I’m glad whacked Aescelin.

SPARROW Jem needs to hurry up and win and save her and start a revolution #JemProtectionSquad

Marus’s interview is so creepy. He didn’t know she was reaped? No one told him? That’s sad!
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 39 . 8/20
tomo:
- "How to stand by his beliefs in a place that sought to punish him for them?)" hes so oppressed for being a good person
- why remind me jest is dead :heartbroken:
- "He remembered that the nanny held his hand instead of his father." thats so fucked up LMFAOOOO
- "Tomo had cried over almost everything in his life. Why not his mother's death?)" damn...
- "As well as Wisdom's mystery solution, which Tomo was nervous to touch." fuck i forgot about that HAHAHA
- "Jem's head lolled toward Tomo, staring up at him. "What do you think?" in jems head hes like USE YOUR FUCKING BRAIN WHATIS IT FOR
- "Tomo," he said, "all of our friends are dead."

"I saw."

"So I feel pretty bad."

"That makes sense." im losing mymind over this exchange oh my god
- "It does," Jem agreed. "Don't get too torn up about it, though. I made it up." LMFAOOOO FUCK OFF
- what a special guy
- "He looked back at Jem. "Me too," he said. "It wasn't in my five-year plan." I WIDSH HE WOUDL STOP TLAKING
- "He could feel his face getting hotter." all your friends are dead you cannot be thinking about your 5 year plan Homosexual AU right now
- "Um… yeah," Tomo said lamely." SOOOO LAMELY.
- this is such an um unique conversation
- "Well, that's… good…" Jem replied. "And that would change the plan?" clock his ass
- fantastic segue
- "I never asked to play," Tomo replied." i mean stupid but fair
- "They tortured her, Tomo," Jem said, getting a bit louder." oh god is he gona start yelling at him
- like hes right but tomo is tomo
- "I- I was holding her off! I didn't want to provoke her!" Tomo argued. "And it worked!" jesus christ
- "Tomo's face was hot again. "I'm trying my hardest."

"Doesn't seem like it."

"I am." sorry but i was frustrated with tomo for the same exact thing so im with jem her
- smth smth politics neutrality is a violent position to take
- "Glad you've been able to walk through life with your eyes shut," Jem continued, his voice flat. "Most of us don't get to live that way. Sounds nice. Easier." on god
- "My life isn't easy," Tomo said." quit while youre down kid
- "He'd have to hope they wouldn't fail him now.)" yeah umm...
- FANTASTIC JUICY ASS POV! DELICIOUS FOOD RB!

mendi:
- "Mendi had never been very fond of baths" FUCKING HELPPP DOES SHE SMELL BAD ALL THE TIME
- "More importantly, it felt better." this just in showering is kind of nice
- "It pushed gently against her sealed lips, her closed eyes, like a goodnight kiss." ouh thats a gorgeous description...
- "Or the warmth of Bryony and Mother." love how bryony and mother are same tier
- Bryony is so Mother
- WEIRD ROCK?!
- surely there is nothing strange or unusual or plot-devicey about this rock

bastet:
- "Bastet had a feeling they'd just interrupted some sort of conversation between them. They didn't care." she usually pretends she doesnt yeah
- "(And she could punish Nine's success and their own failure at the same time.)" wow! very efficient!
- "Bastet wished she would go back to being all teary-eyed and clingy." LMFAOOO
- bas has issues but we been knew that
- "Then leave, Bastet!" Vince said. "Tiss and I want to stay. No one is making you stay." 2V1 LETS GO
- "I see how it is," she said softly. "You two are best friends now. It's almost sweet enough to give me a cavity." i felt the vitriol HAHHA
- "I'm sorry," she murmured. "That you lost her. But this won't change anything." get her ass
- "Bastet didn't think; they slapped Tisiphone across the face, quick and sharp." thats crazy. hitting her cos you cant handle her spitting facts
- "She's better than you could ever be," Bastet ranted. "You never even came close. Twice as boring and half as good. A whiny, pathetic-" JAW DROP AHYAHHAAH OHHH MY GOD
- THE GIRLS ARE FIGHTINGGGG
- GIRL SHE IS DEAD SHES NOT GOING TO SLEEP WITH YOU ANYMORE
- "Have fun holding hands and singing songs! I hope you fucking kill each other!" OH MY GOD AHHHAHA
- this is good
- "Bastet was going to see her eyes again. They didn't care if they belonged to a ghost." OOOHHH THATS GOOD...
- OOOOOHHHH TASTEYYYY.I LICK ALL ME FINGAHHSSSS
- YAYYY LETS GO DOWN THE DOOMED PATH

aescelin:
- "It was so difficult to pray to them, given that they insisted on lurking immediately behind him at all times." HE IS SO FUCKING STUPID HAHAH
- "A gift from the Spirit. A reward, surely, for his labors last night." that is Exactly what it is
- "Inside the box was a folded piece of paper with a name on it.

Valentina." WEEPINGGG
- not for you fuckboy!
- "Her eyes didn't move from the paper. "I… have been given… instructions," she said slowly." Yes...
- "No, Aescelin," she said. "It's you." IM SHITTING MYSELF
- "This could be anyone," he said." thats convenient
- "Bullshit!" he shouted.

Valentina's eyebrows lifted again. "Is that blasphemy I hear?" why is tina the funniest person in fg
- besides vince ofc
- and jem
- delusional until the end... beautiful
- wow valentinas so cool bashing his body in with a bat. fantastic visual!
- back to regular barbecue scheduled programming shortly

aescelin: yeah i have very little to say. your craziness was irreplaceable in this syot...! blows you a kiss you surely have become one with the spirit! and now i can remove my ? tier

m’baby: jesticles
OBSESSED: chase
love!: tomo, jem
CUNT: vince
catsmirk: tiss, miss tina
uh: bas, mendi

till next time,
bonkies
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