Looking forward to seeing how you expand on the least explored house.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.

Gold is so pretty.

They don't diagnose children with sociopathy since most kids shows shades of that kind of behavior, and most grow out of it.

You apparently havent done you're the dilligence when doing research on HP magic or you would have found that wand movmen and pronounciation is not in any way nessesary. Hell, there are clear indications that the fucking wand isn't nessesary.

Magic ability to fry tech seems to me highly circumstancial, and are cause by magic eating Micro crabs, don't belive me? Look it up. Its called a chizpurfle.

Goblin scene was clishe, they are rotten little turds, just because wizards are turds to don't chance that.

Duddly scenes was fun

2 for the SI being egyptian
-1 for him running his mouth the whole time and acting like bruce lee at the age of 10
1 for the visiting professor being Hooch
-5 for the use of the patronus charm as a way to verify magic. Its a rare hard to use spell that is very hard to learn. Hooch is a part time flying coach.
-2 for the SI's attitude and demeanor
-3 for all the christian cursing in a story where its brittish/wizard biased. if you can use the word mate you can use the word merlin or bloody.

This was a good chapter. I was very amused how he acted towards and thought of Hermione, Daphne, and Professor McGonagall.

You will disappoint me (a random internet stranger) if you drop this story. It is pretty good and few Harry Potter fanfictions seem to abstain from “Ron bashing”.
It’s hard to forget an arachnophobe confronting giant, man-eating spiders in the dead of night to help his comatose friend (book 2).
So, please come up with a few story arcs and a conclusion (i.e. and they faced blah blah blah together, as a team; or something equally nice).
I wouldn’t push for you to write continuing adventures in other worlds unless you’re sure you can finish it.
There are so so many unfinished stories on here, and when you get to the last few chapters, and it’s obvious that it isn’t approaching a conclusion, it hurts.
Best of luck

We're all nutters here.

Oh geez, of a monk can be a ghost, it does make you question the afterlife.

Well, Gar proved Daphne wrong, he got into Hufflepuff.

Young McGonagall, not that I mind Maggie, but this young Minerva radiates Maggie energy, so it'll work XD.

And he's in that boat.

Neat about the train bit, magic and technology, and accio a frog, I forget if I mentioned that.

I really do appreciate this fic, even if you never finish it.

And I do hope you go back to What's a Koopa to Do, Young Justice one, or dial.

My all time fave ones.

Koopa to do reminded me of this idea I had of Infamous Second Son/Young justice.

My OC ends up in young justice with the maxed powers of Delsin, and uses them to help best as she can.

Kinda op, but considering Darkseid and the light?

Either way, I love where your mind goes and sharing your writing for it.

It’s not bad, but not for me. He just seems so whiny and it’s really turned me away. I WOULD be interested to see a SI earth bender though, especially if he actually kept within the structure of their bending and didn’t somehow make it chi “magic”, become like the Iroh of Earthbending, massively powerful but a natural traveler.

Dude, you have to continue this. I have no idea why you say you will not finish this. This has the potential to be one of the best Harry Potter stories I have ever read. You turned Harry into a eleven year old badass, but you did it REALISTICALLY. Do you have any idea how many people don’t

No draco? Huh

Neat twist.

Molly is great and deserves to of money.

Rofl Hermione shocked by the language.

Oh god, what flavor bean...and now we know why Albus hasn't touched them for fifty years.

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Are you sure you don't want me to go in with you?" my dad asked as he gave me a hug goodbye.

I chuckled, pulling back to look around the busy train station before meeting his eyes. "I'm sure Pops. Besides, I'm a rambunctious child, I can't have you cramping my style."

"Rambunctious?" my dad rubbed the top of my head, smiling despite his annoyed tone. "That's one word for it. Harry, keep him out of trouble, all right?"

"I will, Mr. Ahmed," Harry said as politely as he could. He nudged me. "Come on, we're going to be late!"

"That's a mistake," I told my dad, rather than acknowledging Harry's comment. "Harry is as much of a trouble magnet as I am."

"Harry is a trouble magnet. You are a trouble generator. Reactor even."

My dad and I traded grins, and for just a moment I missed my real dad even more. He'd have liked my new one.

"Drive safe, dad."

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Awww.

Harry hugs for all.

Acccio.

Oh, you can perform spells before going to school...dang it!

XD

Great work.

Lol Cute baby Brother Ali, and Gawr!

No! The money!

Awww. Yes, he doesn't need money, he needs your friendship, harry.

Bless this, it's great.

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"I can't blame him," I'd brought my copy of The Standard Book of Spells along withCurses and Countercurses (Bewitch Your Friends and etc.) by Professor Vindictus Viridian. "The magic of this world is different than I would have expected. I have no idea if it's hard or soft."

Harry, having gotten used to my way of thinking over the last two years, blinked. "Really? What do you mean?"

"There's hard rules in this world. But it's also sort of soft on the actual magic," I turned a page. "Everyone uses a sort of twisty form of Latin in England in order to make the spells, along with a wand movement. But over in Africa, wands are a new thing, and hand movements are the way. They also use a twisty form of Egyptian instead. Ancient Egyptian at that."

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Yeah, odd that.

So good

This isn’t a bad thing about your fic but I want to say it anyway but Gareth’s dad wouldn’t need to pay for their hospital bills because healthcare is free in England… you only need to pay for prescriptions, that they wouldn’t need

Dude we need more of this!