Reviews for Soft Magic Sucks |
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RHJunior chapter 23 . 8/29/2023 What can I say but I NEED MOAR OF THIS. |
tomahawkESP chapter 23 . 8/29/2023 Shit, that felt like series finale! BRAVO! |
tomahawkESP chapter 17 . 8/29/2023 It’s a canon event, dude. |
Vanessa Masters chapter 23 . 8/28/2023 Awwww. Ending made me weepy. Gar comforting Harry, the feels, seeing his old and new family in the mirror. This is seriously one of the best chapters yet. Awew weight changing dumbells and a magic bookmark. Yes, give Ron new wand, or he'll be vomiting slugs in few years. He spent a lot, knockturn alley and with gifts to friends. Lol Dumbledore will falsely grunt if he wants. - "Is this bad?" Hermione's dad asked as we all walked in. A couple of rougher looking wizards glared at us, then looked away. Ali, still holding his magic balloon, waved at one guy, who waved back awkwardly. "This place doesn't sell anything illegal, does it?" "It does, but we're here for the legal things," I said. "Gar," my dad said with pursed lips. "I promise, it's only as dangerous as anywhere else in the Wizarding World." "That is way too specific a promise," my mom mumbled. Hermione looked around fitfully, clutching at her elbows. I patted her on the shoulders, smiling. "Hey, it's okay. We'll just pick up a few things, then head out. Nothing to it." Almost believed it myself really. - Lol Just be careful. And Gar was...I can't believe he got hand of glory. But all those lotions are cool. And anti-scrying wards, yes! And cute Ali, clapping his hands at seeing his big brother use spells. The wards work. Hagglinfnthat guy, brilliant. And saying he won't spank Daphne. So much was great. And got some magic stuff for Hermione parents and Gars. |
JustAFan123 chapter 23 . 8/26/2023 Shit man, not ma feels! This was a great chapter, I hope everyone gets to shank Voldemort with their new knives at least once, Dumbledore included. |
Guest chapter 23 . 8/26/2023 Always a bit weird to have religious wizards in HP fanfics. They could find out that some of their holy book is just wizards pranking muggles. |
RedPenandScroll chapter 23 . 8/28/2023 You really are a great writer. Despite some simplistic dialogue, and sometimes because of it, the characters you write feel very human. Not gonna lie, I teared up at the mirror scene. I'd probably see the same thing. |
AWriterFanFic chapter 10 . 8/27/2023 ...Potoo is a real bird! |
Seruvius chapter 23 . 8/27/2023 Wonderful chapter, v wholesome |
Hitmen101 chapter 23 . 8/26/2023 Thanks for the chapter! :D :) |
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 23 . 8/26/2023 The Christmas presents were adorable. The changes with the mirror plot have me worried. KEEP BEING AWESOME! |
raimondimi chapter 23 . 8/26/2023 Thanks for the chapter! I love this story! |
RonaldM40196867 chapter 23 . 8/26/2023 Hermione should be a teacher. This is cool. |
Reader8916 chapter 19 . 7/30/2023 Sigh. I don’t understand why you have the guy with the adult life memories being the one acting the most childishly. He keeps telling himself he needs to be stronger, everything will be ok when he’s stronger. The thing with the troll was a mess because he simply didn’t bother thinking ahead. At all. Not even a little. It would have been SO SIMPLE to avoid the entire thing. Hell, just walk in and carry Hermione out over his shoulder instead of standing there talking. Being stronger won’t help at all as long as he’s an imbecile. |
Reader8916 chapter 13 . 7/30/2023 I’m hoping that it wasn’t really intentional, but you’ve made your SI seem to be fairly weak and useless at magic. Other than being able to preform a pretty half-ass summoning charm, he’s not particular intelligent, or powerful, or thoughtful, or … anything noteworthy. Very much the opposite of what is generally considered the point of having an SI. Makes for a pretty boring story compared to the SI standard. |