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First of all, great to see an update for this story. Looking forward to all the drama that is about to go down in Wave.

On the other hand, what was that part about Naruto's team talking about being close to the ocean and this being the first time they left Kumo's teritory, when they'd already been to the Land of Tea.
Especially, when Omoi complained about dealing with Konoha shinoby AGAIN, so that implies you haven't forgot about it.

Well, looks like this meeting between Darui and Kakashi's teams is gonna be intense, especially if Sasuke demands to fight one of those on Darui's team. Makes sense that Sai would be on Team 7, so that Danzo could keep a close eye on Sasuke and make sure that he doesn't leave Konoha or anything like that

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so team 7, naruto and itachi in the same city. darui doesn't know how right he will be.
but at least naruto already know about his parents an he was born in konoha.

Oh dear. This is about to get fun

WTF, Tsunade is with the Akatsuki? And how do they not know where the Nibi and Nanabi is?

It'll be interesting how Itachi got into Akatsuki, if he's still part of Konoha and I wonder how Pein knows that Naruto will eventually be in Wave Country. Also, would Jiraiya teach Naruto how to use the Rasengan at some point and have him sign the Toad Summoning Contract?

interesting. Its been a while since i've seen this story and more fun is on the way

Awesome chapter man keep it up and update again soon as possible thanks. And as usual the sooner the better Would be appreciated please and thanks.

Well, looks like things are gonna be awkward in Kumo now, as I wouldn't be surprised if the people of the village will know that something is going on with Naruto and the Raikage. It'll be interesting what Naruto will choose to do and how people will react

Awesome chapter keep it up and update again soon as possible thanks. The sooner the better Would be appreciated please and thanks.

So Hyuga Incident doesn't happen but did the Third Great Ninja War happen? You know the event that saw Obito get crushed, Kakashi get his eye, Minato get his moniker, and oh right THE THIRD RAIKAGE DIES?

Isn't the 3rd Raikage already dead at this point, he dies during the Third Great Ninja War holding off 10,000 enemy Shinobi. Kakashi was a kid during the war and Naruto was 2-3 years from being born?

It's an interesting fic, I will fav and follow it to see where it leads.