Reviews for Fated OneS
Mannarone69 chapter 8 . 11/30/2024
Will you ever update this?
ALPHA02FURY97 chapter 8 . 4/4/2024
it has been nearly a year now please update this looks good!
hiward chapter 8 . 3/18/2024
update plzzzz
A. J Savage chapter 3 . 3/11/2024
Artemis has so many abandonment issues !
A. J Savage chapter 1 . 3/11/2024
Damn, the Artemis Familia are a bunch of sexist assholes !
Guest chapter 8 . 2/6/2024
This is great please keep this story going
Larro44-LL chapter 8 . 1/28/2024
Ahhhhhhhhh fucking cliff hanger! Dammit and it was getting good
DanmachiFan chapter 8 . 1/27/2024
You going to make more?
Sagarel's Devil chapter 8 . 1/19/2024
Huh
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That was unexpected. Would love to see more.
Sagarel's Devil chapter 6 . 1/19/2024
UWOOOOO SEGGGGS— WHOLESOME SEGGS
Hell Yeah! Awesome chapter.
SSJ3 Kyuubi Gohan chapter 8 . 1/19/2024
Confusing but exciting, I really can't figure out how Loki will factor in. Obviously Bell is going to be Orion and Odr but I don't remember Astarea having something like that.
kamol chapter 1 . 1/2/2024
trash fic don't come back
Guest chapter 8 . 12/20/2023
Any Christmas sex update coming soon?
Hakeuth chapter 8 . 11/8/2023
An amazing chapter and an amazing story. I really like the characters and their relationships. Will you continue this story?
Reviewer-kun chapter 8 . 11/7/2023
Since it’s another case of multiple blessings stacked on top of each other , might as well let these two become his mentor and incorporate their fighting styles into his arsenal. Astraea is impeccable with her sword which even Alise was deeply traumatized when she first started training with her. Artemis is incredibly quick witted and in tune with nature along with absolute precision in every strike. Bell can literally copy, merge and improve upon both of their styles. Not to mention there’s another goddess of war joining the roster soon. This made realize that you haven’t given something akin to his very own original and signature weapon/power yet, and this is regarded to your other Bell as well. In KIIF you briefly showed him using jet black armor made of OEBD’s power so I was thinking along the same line in this fic. Power of star, or constellation, then Orion, arrow and sword, purity, etc so why not take some concept from divine cloth in Saint Seiya? For example, the Omega series has elemental cloth which can be stored in a piece of jewelry for easy transformation, and coincidentally the Orion cloth has Lightning attribute with pretty sleek design, better when awakened. Who cares if only Athena can command the Saints anyway, we don’t talk about that. The divine armor will be a straight up better version of enchantment magic with increased stats boost in all area plus unique finishing moves. Or just for the sake of badassery you can immediately refer to Dudu’s Dea Anchora battlesuit playstyle. Needless to say we all know she is so damn satisfying to play with, especially at rank SS and beyond. With the Orion Arrow in hand it’s just so fun to picture Bell battling in a bombastic fashion like her, not to mention all those impact from those uppercutting and kicking. Perfection. Drawing power from a bubble universe can be the equivalent of the soul holding a true blessing with a growing fragment of Arcanum inside perhaps? It’s still confusing sometimes to really comprehend imaginary power source, even with Aeons ( celestial deities) and their Emanators. Paths in Star rail and Domains in Danmachi mythology can either overlap or clash with each other, to put it lightly. At least it’s not too difficult to scale it down from cosmic level to plane level. Different rules apply differently anyway, despite the similarities, like Herrscher and Stigma power, one prevalent and superior in HI3 and vice versa in GGZ. Oops sidetracked, sorry! It’s just that I’ve been pretty excited when you planned to cook up a fic between Bell and Elysia (and Kafka) so even when it’s not in a foreseeable future, there’s still hope. Especially when you are still trying to catch up and clear the long over due update for those horny in the Den. The thirst must be sated even though in my opinion, smut can definitely but also doesn’t have to be everything in a fic. The wait is inevitable anyway so better be optimistic and patient instead of miserable over it. Things had been exhausted and borderline fatal for you so as a fan I wish you the bests of luck, health, resilience and vigor to survive through all the current shit storms out there. Hang in there.

P/s: As they are often called “ Cancer of the world”, do you think the Dungeon is capable of producing one at a slow rate (each era) and the reason for the OEBD’s overwhelming power was because it had a Stellaron inside, as it can corrupt and harness even more power from the divines and spirits? A power that couldn’t be completely destroyed and only be temporarily sealed? Until a certain condition is met. Something like the covenant deep down the end of the dungeon. Honestly I think Bell will die, sacrificing himself to save the girls and the world in the end. Most suitable ending as Omori laughs while watching fan of each Ship kill the other. No one loses. And there’s a winning chance for everyone, in whatever their next life incarnation later on, 10000 years of love harem version. For those in the Cult, Ryu obviously is the GOAT, but do you honestly still like her that much had she not gone through everything in the main series up until this point? What if she just remains the young Leon with her constant “ Seigi no nanda?”. ALISE IS THE BEST, PERIOD. ARDEE IS NUMBER 1, PERIOD. LEFIYA IS THE WORLD’S MOST ADORABLE SISTER, PERIOD. LONG LIVE THE MILFS!

Seriously, please update soon! Thank you very much.
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