Reviews for Fated OneS
Edrick Twilight Legend chapter 7 . 6/2/2023
I have a feeling that when bell walks in orario he's not gonna last a day before Freya comes and tries to get him inside her in front of everyone if she must...

but that's just me throwing my guess into the ring love the story so so much please keep the marvellous work.
Bezdushnyy chapter 7 . 6/2/2023
Another great chapter! Thank you for taking the time to write this. The feelings expressed are amazing and the way they interact with each other is just so beautifully done. I’ve always loved your stories but I feel recently I’m loving them even more. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Kirilejo chapter 6 . 5/29/2023
What a beautiful moment of Bell and Artemis I Love it
ChaosPS chapter 6 . 5/28/2023
Está genial la historia, te deja deseando saber que es lo que sigue
Guest chapter 6 . 5/25/2023
More sex please!
Guest chapter 6 . 5/13/2023
You know what? I’ve been playing too much Honkai Star rail so every time I look at Pom Pom, I can’t help but picture Bell’s rabbit form being like that. Those Pom Pom message icons are absolutely adorable. Shenanigans are bound to happen if Bell transforms into that bundle of overloading cuteness too. With all the goodness in your heart please spare a bit of consideration for the idea.
Commissioner chapter 1 . 4/28/2023
Hello, i am the commissioner of this story and decided to say a few things, so lets not keep you waiting

Anikong: Loki will stay, doesnt matter that she doesnt compare, i want her in it.

JL Davenport: Hestia is a no go, hate that hoe and her pairing with a passion

InsaneMakaioshin: The only ones in the harem are Freya, Artemis, Astrea and Loki. Two Greek and Two Norse goddesses, no more. No one else is being added to harem. As for what Familia he will be joining. The answer is Yes.
Anikong chapter 6 . 4/25/2023
Really great story and chapter. Can't wait for Freya to join the battle and make it Odr (Bell) vs Orion (Bell).

Also just want to say the goddess choices for the harem are great, but personally I would replace Loki. Compared to the other three she just doesn't compare.
AlanTawers chapter 6 . 4/18/2023
The story is eroge, but oh my gosh, it's superbly well written.
Good job Dude
23bradymoore chapter 6 . 4/12/2023
Great chapter
RedHalloween chapter 6 . 4/11/2023
Let's go another awesome chapter! Really interested in seeing the aftermath of the chapter end and how Astraea will react. Also very excited to see Freya arrive and how she'll be interacting with Bell and the two goddesses. Picked this up on a whim of curiosity and I'm glad I did. Great chapter as always, can't wait for the next ones to follow. Keep up the great work and writing!
johnpgiligin chapter 6 . 4/10/2023
This is my favorite chapter so far! I think that the emotions were portrayed well, albeit a bit slow at the beginning. I had thought that the village had some care for those who inhabit it, if only for the simple reason that if more people die, there is more of a workload for those who live, but apparently not. Put that with Bell's nature and you can see why he acts the way he does. It also explains why Bell has become (in my opinion) so devoted to Astraea and Artemis even though he has only hosted them for a couple of days, as it's probably the most care and love he has received in a while. It was a bit sad to read the bits of Artemis Familia getting destroyed with what seems to be Rethusa being the sole survivor. Will you make a chapter about what exactly happened to them or is it just going to left as it is? And with the ending being Bell and Artemis being caught having some fun time by Astraea, I am excited see what the next chapter beholds!

P.S: Sorry for the word barf.
Deceive chapter 6 . 4/9/2023
Loved the way this chapter turned out, you’re doing a fantastic job with this. Looking forward to every update!
aiman031122 chapter 6 . 4/9/2023
damn that was hot can't not wait to see what kind of reaction astraea will has will she join bell or opposide hope you will update soon because i really can't not wait to see what will happen next so has a nice day take care of your healty and stay safe update soon bye.
Pokeymaster chapter 6 . 4/9/2023
Good chapter can’t wait for the next one
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