I've thoroughly enjoyed this, there's a few mistakes here and there like grammar, typos or subject verb disagreements but they're minor and don't break my Immersion too much.

I think just having Konan and Obito there was a good choice, just enough characters to keep Naruto's past a problem but not enough to take away from him being in a new story, but you've not just got them as obstacles who immediately join Salem, they've got room for their own development and a fresh start.

I think more people writing Naruto crossovers should use the genin version, he's not too strong for RWBY, there's enough possible variety with unpredictable semblances that he can't speed blitz or brute force against, my favourite type of naruto combat is where he fully utilises his trickery with clones, he's also got a lot of ways he can still develop.

His relationshio with Maria is very sweet and I like how Lapis and Sapphire have been done, especially Lapis, he's very brave and loyal but he's also a kid without any previous conditioning or training, dealing with all of the problems of a displaced child soldier with a malicious nuke in his belly.

Very good job with your OC's so far (unless they're earlier canon characters, idk, stopped watching after season 3, i recognize Maria).

I'm also a sucker for canon Divergence, every step bringing Naruto closer to the main characters and plot has had a good reason behind it, instead of him just dropping into beacon and Ozpin giving him a free scholarship into beacon, i'm just hoping that if he does go to Beacon, you'll continue going the divergent path.

I love the relationship between Naruto and Kurama as well, yes, they reached an understanding, but it was through mutual hatred of an enemy, Naruto is currently too broken to approach Kurama as an equal and accept him, while Kurama is still too filled with hatred and sees Naruto as his jailor, he does feel something but its buried under his cynical outlook, rage and pride.

It's too early for them to become proper friends, though with what is happening with Obito and the pool, I'm thinking that Naruto might confront his darker half sooner than later.

I find it really funny that Obito is struggling so much more because he doesn't have Kamui, the image of him grumpily riding bullheads because he keeps having to go back and forth is hilarious.

I'm very interested in Obito right now, noting the people as innocents and getting angry about Konan almost killing them, it makes sense I guess, these aren't his people and he truly believes he can get back to his world.

He truly believes he's doing the right thing and doesn't want senseless bloodshed.

He also doesn't have black zetsu whispering in his ear and isn't constantly seeing the worst of Shinobi.

This history is so good! in a few chapters this history become of one of my favorites. hope for an update

I feel like I'm not the onl one that forgot about the wolf ears... especialy since they weren't mentioned for quite some time

Very good story man! I hope you continue writing it! I think you have created a masterpiece, the only downside is that it isnt an epic length yet.

Chapter 3 songWe don’t talk about Bruno no no no no we don’t talk about Brunoooooo. But its was my wedding day (it was our wedding day) we were getting ready and there wasn’t a cloud in the sky (no clouds allowed in the sky)”

Great chapter. Please continue!

no not really, find it kinda lame with the word choices.
Particulates? particle is the right sentence structure

This chapter killed any future enjoyment I will have for this story. I DID NOT want to see those assboles here. I wanted to see naruto in the RWBYverse. With more naruto characters, it will just detract more and more from naruto interacting with remnant. It will be ALL about naruto trying to "stop" the akatski again. This story is pointless.

This is great plus they finally meet in person soo I'm asking you please update this soon

Hello dear writer of this wonderful story, I was wondering if you would let me do a reading of your story.

well hello, XD blazeraptor can you give me permission to read your story is that I liked it a lot and I think about publishing it on Wattpad and in fanfiction

Kudos

Hasta aora este fin me a gustando bastante, ojalá la actualizes pronto

Yay they finally meet! That was one of the best first meetings I’ve read in a long time, I loved it! I look forward to more of Naruto and Ruby scenes. Great story so far! The action is intense, good job!